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05-18-04, 02:08 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Ill blow u up
IP: 937F C2E6
I wana blow up dis game//
But when I do ya'll will wana do the same// All you guys want is fortune and fame// Your just same lame assed noone wid a fucked up name// ur trying to spit ur shit but u choke...shame// u gave head to another guy.....he neva came// This shows u, u r so fuckin lame// u cdnt fit it in ur hand// Cos u cant stretch it out as ur piece is so small// But ur so fuckin tall?// If you take me out on a shopping spree in the mall// And always catch me when I fall// I might fall for u// It sumink relitavley new// And ill continue if I get feedback ( Tell me if u thinks its shit, ta xxx) **MWAH**
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05-19-04, 11:48 AM | #2 | |||||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP: 5C5F 906E
not to badd but u need to stop wit the cum lines i mean c'mon u tried that shyt in our battle.........................but overall good stuff
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05-19-04, 01:24 PM | #3 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: D06E 6198
i didnt like it u need 2 work on ur vocab and flw and srtucture and multis but ok verse how long have been rhymin
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05-19-04, 02:45 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 937F C2E6
, hehe not long atall, I cant rhyme but I try hehe, some of ma mates said to sign up o I did.....Thanks for ya honest opinion
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05-19-04, 03:44 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 0136 10AF
u can rhyme u jus need to elavate cmon ellen u no u can
xXx
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05-20-04, 10:13 AM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 40B2 4A8C
u need 2 elevate n ya vocab was down u coulda did this betta
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