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05-08-03, 04:02 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Running Thru The Dark
IP: D0B1 D2B1
i walk through the dark, in the pouring rain,
feeling all this excruciating pain, it endours my body as i begin to run, who is this man..trying to have fun, chasing me with a knife and laughing all at once, he must think this is a game, i am screaming for my life, and he's yelling my name, it begins to rain harder, and seems way to dark tonight, i cannot see where i am going, not even knowing, if i'm going to live, he is getting closer and i am running faster, i cannot get away, today could be my last, as i slowy begin to sway, i fall to the ground and cannot get up, he comes forth to me, so abrupt, "what do you want, what did I do," screaming for dear mercey as he laughs, visions of my life are running so fast, "its nothing you did, it's what i am," he laughs in anguish and looks into my eyes, just as i think today was my last sunrise, he says to me, "you are very pretty," i am crying in the woods lying on the ground, his devious smile, then turns to a frown, i cannot do this, and he turns around, he takes the knife, it falls to the ground, he runs away, as i am lying there breathless, looking to the sky, asking god, "why," the sky then turns into the window in my room, watching myslef sleep, i must be doomed, panting hard, and trying to catch my breath, then waking up in a deep sweat, the worst dream that i ever had, i never knew they could turn out so bad. |
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05-08-03, 07:41 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: E293 6BFB
yo illest the more i see ure stuff the more i like it this was nice man decent vocab and a good flow think.keep it up man
peace out |
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