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07-21-05, 04:28 PM | #1 | |
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Hella tight
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yo here go a dope verse i just typed real quick
Yo i jumped in this thing spittin toxic words/ people try ta knock da verbs/youll popped wit words/ cause i aint gotta use a nine ta clap ya/ my mic. will blast ya and have you doing the harlem shake backwards/ youll get jacked up cause king straight killin' you/ yo styles like phone sex dawg im just not feelin you/ man you can see from the free's dat im strait hotta/ wanna be supa man check it im the horse to stop ya/ im so propa'/............an everybody on my team so clean/ cause we getting green like collards/ yo check out this drop by axel. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201076
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07-21-05, 05:16 PM | #2 | |
Flyweight
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uppin..........
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07-21-05, 05:24 PM | #3 | ||
~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Yo this was tight I liked the punches but don't put the / at the end of each bar it doesn't look good doin text that way but just work on structure and you'll be coo rtf on "How Its Going Down" thanxx!
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07-21-05, 05:34 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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thnx........uppin again
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07-21-05, 05:47 PM | #5 | |
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My rhymes got stats but cats blind like bats should live in caves
While hoods just craves for these, best knock on wood and be BRAVE Got corrupt clout up and about domes and microphone so best behave Got a medallion a bright shine like white Italian wine cats Get drunk fast when this funk is dumped in a glass where yall at? My stats major like Muscat flavor best pour up a cup its phat Even low hell rise when a Nobel prize is presented to scholars |
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07-21-05, 05:54 PM | #6 | ||
Banned: Biting
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Yeah Man the Punchez was Tight as a Virgins Pussy lol
I Like this it was very short though I feel that more couldve been said but yet it was Hella Tight and oh Yeah Word of Advice: Dont Put The / < sign at the end of ya lines makes it look wack PLEASE RTF IN THIS OM (ITS SHORT) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201095 |
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07-21-05, 06:43 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP:
thnx..........i always fuck up the structure................ima probably drop some mo shit
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07-21-05, 07:28 PM | #9 | |
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thnx.................uppin
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07-24-05, 11:59 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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uppin.......................
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