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10-09-05, 04:24 PM
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Intermental - Twinkling Star (dedicated to my aunt...RIP Aunt Nas)
IP: 3831 85DD
This song is dedicated to my Aunt Nas, she died when I was seven, one of my closest aunts, I felt I had to put it in song....
www.soundclick.com/intermental "Twinkling Star" http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211022 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210934
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10-09-05, 04:29 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
intro sounded like some disney music
after that...it was cool I like how u have added dubbing to ur verses lyrics were felt flow/rhyme scheme cudda be more complex...but I feel that u were being real here good str8 track homie |
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10-09-05, 04:30 PM
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IP: 3831 85DD
I apreciate it dawg.......yea I know it could be more complex but it was real nah im sayin....thanks for the feed
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10-09-05, 04:54 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 9AFF 56BB
get on msn man.
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10-09-05, 06:21 PM
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IP: 80D7 4EFC
iite i hollered....yo upppp
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10-10-05, 03:17 AM
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IP: 50B6 EBD9
upppin...................................
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10-10-05, 06:06 AM
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
iite beat is kool.... emotion could be better for this type of track but its iite sounds lkike your trying to be angry but keeping quiet... don't worry bout your next door neighbour man jus belt it out... lyrics are nice man.... flow is pretty good.. nice track man i like it pz
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10-10-05, 06:24 AM
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IP: 50B6 EBD9
apreciate that.........
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10-10-05, 11:26 AM
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IP: B47B DF61
upppin.........................
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10-10-05, 03:02 PM
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IP: FEA7 665B
seems like u got a very nice flow dope beat mixed somee good emotion like te way u made ya voice in this man this may b one of ya best v good keep up
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10-10-05, 03:10 PM
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IP: 3CC8 7DB9
thanks..........
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10-10-05, 04:56 PM
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IP: 308B 0A66
upppppppppp..................
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10-11-05, 05:12 AM
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IP: 2374 9D9A
uppppppppp..........
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10-11-05, 10:22 PM
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IP: D9E5 3D89
* listening as i drop feed *
beat intro is real good, i like this beat flow is kinda choppy, could be better emotion could be better too lyrics are nice not a bad track, still got work to do Pz. INF |
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10-11-05, 11:45 PM
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
The beat you use is pretty good, nice slow n a nice melody. Your flow is pretty good, the fact that you really keep on story is good, emotion could be upped. But theres somin that makes me ahte the sound of your voice, its not your voice actually its somin you do to make it sound better which doesnt make it sound better to me. anyway the track is pretty good i can see your comin along well.
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