Voted For: Stanza

stanza- good punches but some punches were wack and unneeded, alotta weird shit but i guess that helps for originality, lol, not really any multies, good personals, decent verse, nice opener and closer also....

wicked one- good flow, but bad structure decent multies, the punches were also decent but no personals in this verse good opener,, iffy closer though

heres the breakdown

opener-tie
closer-S
multies-tie
punches-S
personals-S
structure-S
vocab-W
werdplay-S

my vote goes to stanza

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