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Check in by: 02-19-05 at 02:40 PM

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MC IgGY has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 02:11 PM.

Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 02:12 PM.

Iggys one of the wackess mcs of plenty//
Fuck punches, ill spray wit da semi, until da clips is empty, ya Dig me?//
Dis nigga try dissing me, fuck it, hes a bitch to me//
Ill grip da heat, cock It back, clap, and then hes history//
Listen to me, dis niggas a fuckin amateur//
I got da hammer tucked, step to Blac-out, then Ima damage ya//
Rv'll just laugh at ya, the way you gotta knock-out//
You beatin me? That’s like, Not seein a new cd of 2pac out//
So chill, your battle record of wins getting to 10-is-rarely//
Hey Strobe!!!! Dig up a whole, add this nigga to RV's Cemetery//
And remember………..da names blac-out, so get it right and keep it right//
Before I get da heat, and feed it, so you definitely wont be able to speak it right//

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"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

ur gona get dropped harder than snow in a flurry
My punches hit you right between the eyes, make ur vision go blurry
against me your require a higher level of writing
even if ur words were fire, you still wouldnt beat me fighting
you could concrete my Carters 50 feet deep in water and not keep me under
blac the buster aint seen these keys like he was Ray Charles
This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty
this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty
this fool couldnt be hot if his last name was stove
im a eagle, this lil kid is a baby dove
ill reconstruct his complexion, destruct all his sexual sensation , and ill end this lyrical discrimination
I'ma use white out to get ur flowless blac ink out

Voted For: Blac-Out

Breakdown...

Name:BLac-Out

Verse:
Iggys one of the wackess mcs of plenty//
Fuck punches, ill spray wit da semi, until da clips is empty, ya Dig me?//
Dis nigga try dissing me, fuck it, hes a bitch to me//
Ill grip da heat, cock It back, clap, and then hes history//
Listen to me, dis niggas a fuckin amateur//
I got da hammer tucked, step to Blac-out, then Ima damage ya//
Rv'll just laugh at ya, the way you gotta knock-out//
You beatin me? That’s like, Not seein a new cd of 2pac out//
So chill, your battle record of wins getting to 10-is-rarely//
Hey Strobe!!!! Dig up a whole, add this nigga to RV's Cemetery//
And remember………..da names blac-out, so get it right and keep it right//
Before I get da heat, and feed it, so you definitely wont be able to speak it right//

Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup bro, i think that you need to work on your structure as do i...other than that keep droppin them...

Stats...
Punches:5/10
Metaphors:3/10
Wordplay:0/10
Structure:2/10
Personals:3/10
Total:13/60
Percentage:21.6%

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Name:MC IGGY

Verse:
ur gona get dropped harder than snow in a flurry
My punches hit you right between the eyes, make ur vision go blurry
against me your require a higher level of writing
even if ur words were fire, you still wouldnt beat me fighting
you could concrete my Carters 50 feet deep in water and not keep me under
blac the buster aint seen these keys like he was Ray Charles
This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty
this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty
this fool couldnt be hot if his last name was stove
im a eagle, this lil kid is a baby dove
ill reconstruct his complexion, destruct all his sexual sensation , and ill end this lyrical discrimination
I'ma use white out to get ur flowless blac ink out

Need/Don’t need to work on:Sup playa....overall i think you need to rethink how you write i mean "under and Charles" do not rhyme...just keep tryin fam...

Stats:
Punches:2/10
Metaphors:2/10
Wordplay:0/10
Structure:4/10
Personals:2/10
Multies:0/10
Total:10/50
Percentage:20.0%

Return the Favor in the sig against J DOT...personally i think i won...good battle fam..pz..

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thanks.................uppin
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Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Uppin............................................. .................................................. ....................

__________________

Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Uppin............................................. ........

__________________

Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Voted For: Blac-Out

IMO blac-out took dis 1 hands down....he had better vocab a more complex verse and harder hitting punches....i was feeling his verse a lot more...iggy you have to get ur punches hitting a lot harder..you have to throw a lil creativity into it instead of the original shit....

my vote goes to Blac-out.......

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Thinks....................Uppin................... ....................................2-0

__________________

Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Uppin............................................. ..................................................

__________________

Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Can i get sum votes..................................*Uppin*

__________________

Young Montana

"No More Mista Nice Guy"





Rapdemon: fuck man
DaFutureJoka: wa?
Rapdemon: u=dope
DaFutureJoka: lol
Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick
DaFutureJoka: thanks?
Rapdemon: haha
PSA

Voted For: MC IgGY

not bad not bad.
Blac-out defintley took this battle in the flowing aspects of it. But i think that overall, with punches, wordplay, (not structure), this was taken by mc iggy.
hottest bar i think is...
This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty
this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty

you need to work a lil bit on your flow though, looked more like a 5th grade poem (structurally) but, yea you took this.

YA OUT!

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