Picture battle



Check in due: 9/14
Verse due 9/20
Line limit open:

Check..goodluck...whoever you may be

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"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

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<< Led poetic.

But yeah checkmate like chesse

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Thoth i hope you voted last round if not you wont be able to post your verse and that means i win

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But hey if you aint got your links then ill drop a no-show verse... if you drop a real verse i will drop mine... let me key something up real quick

As the darkening clowds roll in
from the heavens everything turns black
in the heat of the passion no longer clothing
too intense now to even start to look back
the gods becon for me to do it but i refuse
the voices echo in my head with resistants
the clouds lighten up, and i see my muse
shrouded by light with a sertian persistance
a young female, just a mere eight year old pesant
girl with tattered garments hanging from her body
A flash back in the past, now realizing the present
and what i was told to do, as i contimplate sadly
about what i must do, the girl touches my shoulder
and tells me to let go, with that i listen and go insane
I plunge the dagger into his heart onto the boulder
inside the sacred place people know as Gethsemane



alright so yeah 15 lines real quick... and Gethsemane is a sacred garden right outside jerusalem, where jesus wast arrested and betrayed. fits perfect with the picture atucally

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so, you want to get me DQ'd on a technicality i wasn't aware of.....why? because you know you can't beat me any other way?

you're a fucking douche bag...i'll drop 10 lines, and destroy anything you write, regardless of how long it takes you. You're not shit on here, that's why you got KO'd 5-0 first round in the fucking punchline league....you suck dude, that's all there is to it.

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

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by the way, how much talent does it take, to take a bible story...something that's already been written, and re-tell the same story..with your own words?

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

enough shit talk, Thoth isnt DQ'd based on the fact that we want battles to go through with with as less DQ's as possible. Lampejo. feel free to edit your verse by drop date and Toth you still have the right to rop a verse.

Rofl at you thoth... i was just letting you know about the links.. you think i actually care.. and aint shit huh? am the best writer on here now exept mabye myself... shit what you accomplished on this site? not shit that i know of. Me? first poet of the year... multiple poet of the month... blah fuck you i dont even wanna get into this...

Fuck ill probably keep the verse i have there

and there is no bible story like that hoe... only thing that has to do with the bible is 1 fucking word in my piece so hows that work out you baboon... go shave your ass fag

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right dude, there is no bible story like that. You're right. You can tell that to everyone else on here that isn't educated...and it looks like your sorry ass attempt to get me dq'd didn't work...so...you can leave your verse..or you can write a new one..either way, you're going to lose...and you know it. You're not even close to being the best writer on the site...you suck dude, thats all there is to it..you want to brag about poetry? on a site where 99% of the people who read poetry dont even understand the elements that go into it? That's like being proud because a kid whos never watched basketball before, votes you into the all-star game, just because you're name sounds cool..you're accomplishments don't mean shit to anyone but you...do you seriously think you walk around here and people say..."oh my god..that's led poetic..he has been poet of the month" or whatever the fuck you call it...nope..nobody cares dudes...you used to be decent..now you suck...and anyone will agree who isn't riding your nuts

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

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Thoth you fucking fag... talk all that shit and then your bitch ass aint even fucking show... you lame fuck

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Lampejo wins .

Word... YS you know you should really close them after you post who wins so that it will reduce freeposts and all that.

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Vote lamp for actully being cool and showing up............

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