i think that people naturally word things that is appealing.... there have been tons of times where ive heard two people with basically the same type of concept, and one can blow me away with it, while the other is a "meh", based on how they word it and express it.... this i think is basically ur natural ability.... ur ability to write can be improved but it takes A LOT of discipline to break habits and find a better way to state ur ideas without slipping into ur old habits, if those habits are unnappealing...

but like someone said earlier. NO ONE can naturally freestyle.... even if u are naturally a quick thinker, free styling is way too hard of a thing to even be able to DO more than a few lines of ur first time trying, let alone having it be good..... this is the same with making songs... no ones first record take is gold, even if theyve been the best battler on Smack DVD.... u needa learn the tricks of the trade

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