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Old 02-26-09, 05:30 PM   #1
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Week 4: Adam 0-0 .vs Bronze budda 3-0

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Battles Up Wednesday
Verses Due Saturday (16-48 bars)
Agree upon a time/bar limit b4 Battle
Min 1 Minute / Max 3 Minutes
Battles Close Tuesday Night


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T.V. Show .vs T.V. Show
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Adam (Prank'd)




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bronze buddha (Yo Momma)



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Old 02-26-09, 09:23 PM   #2
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Lol, I've never seen Yo Momma, must be some American shit.
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Old 02-28-09, 12:58 PM   #3
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If you show, I'll actually try..

Live performance, bitches.. turn it up real loud, my mic doesn't pick up well on youtube.

I have a cold, sorry about the voice.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YlI-KHdTtAo


Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.
Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.

Damn you're a laugh dude, I'll easily punk your ass,
My shows still fresh, I doubt that yours will last.
Let's check the past and our old TV series,
I was bigger than and you're still nowhere near me.

Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.
Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.

Fez you're just a punk bitch, no one really likes you,
You dated Lohan and you turned her to a dyke dude.
But that's your style, you do it at your will
I be fucking Demi, and we all know she's a MILF.

Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.
Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.

I'm making movies too, you're still just my groupie,
I roll in millions baby, you beg for rupees.
All that I say is true, there's no doubt about it,
You know the words by now, let me hear you shout it


Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.
Yo momma's so fat, Yo momma's so this
Yo momma's so dumb, Yo momma sucks dick.
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Old 03-01-09, 06:49 PM   #4
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still aint got access to a mic, so i got to do it up on..
you tube!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CHdfjmKiv70


...notice i stretched my vocals on the end too
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Old 03-01-09, 09:46 PM   #5
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jesus christ that budda guy's shit was HORRIBLE

she so dumb, she was her feet with Jello

yeah, your freestyling skill's are garbage bro

pink glass's were good tho

vote: Adam
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Old 03-02-09, 08:09 PM   #6
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lmao. this battle was a little weird honestly.


Adam, you shit was alright man. like you hit the theme well, but nothing
was really that strong. Like this wasn't personal song .vs personal song
feel me. You needed to make it more like a battle verse...against Yo Momma
that singin shit wasn't bad. like you def got a good voice, and if thats the
way you want to go about posting your verses. thats cool, by all means go
with that. But just keep in mind, that its not always about just writing to the theme
you still got to focus on punches and hitting your opponent. for whatever they are that week.


bronze- at first i was just like what the fuck?? i mean it wasn't rhyming, flow was off.
and you actually started out dissing yo momma..when you were supposed to be dissing prank'd....but then like after it clicked off and came back on....it as just like it looked. You just started over, with something fresh. Started hitting a lil more, started dissing prank'd. you looked hilarious, so that helped lol. I like that little touch, overall i think u had like 1 or 2 funny lines, the rest was blah.

not bad battle though guys, i think im gon have to give this to Bronze though.

slightly caught it
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Old 03-06-09, 12:21 AM   #7
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to be honest civil i pretty much freestyled the shit but i had writen for it i shoul have just spit that but wen you on piff you feel like supa man lol
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Old 03-07-09, 01:18 PM   #8
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v/ adam. nice guitar skills. dint know u could sing, good shit mate.

bronze was shit if u had suttin written then y dint u do that?
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