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Voted For: CODEE

Yo man CLOSE CLOSE battle in here

Peep mine return the favor dog

(cod)
Well let's see another battle and this bitch bout to get took down.
U say that your not from the circus but to me u look like a shook clown.<<BEST line in match

(shake) U came weak

yo ima be known as a hacker the way i break-"Codees"/(codes)
cause he still wouldnt win if he hacked into the system and changed-votes/
(Nice but codee killed it)

Multis :Cod

Overall CODEE

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Voted For: shake-spear

alright, props to both here, but here's the verdict.

codee-good effort, i can see that you are new to this, just keep at it. the problem was rhyme scheme in this one. the third line had no following line to rhyme with it. you just jumped into a new rhyme. sometimes this is good to hear on a track if it is done right, but unfortunately in your case it was not done right. points off for that. The flow was jumbled, but your structure was decent.

shake-spear- you had this one on better punches and flow
yo ima be known as a hacker the way i break-"Codees"/(codes)
cause he still wouldnt win if he hacked into the system and changed-votes/

nice opener.
this verse wasn't spectacular, but it wasn't just average either, it waas a good all around verse

u should be happy u the "head" of somtin ur "Co" of "dee"'z-nuts/
great personal.
so with good punches, and personals, you get this one.

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Voted For: shake-spear

shake spear took this one...his punches were harder...he had betta flow...and structure...

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Voted For: shake-spear

well damn i wasnt feelin the flow really until second to last bar that was nasty lol that pretty much won teh whole battle for wit the personal about Co of dee z nuts lol that was hot son
both structure was ight
code's flow was pretty basic n unimaginative really so ima give this to spear bcuz of that personal at the end and punches hit harder
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