^why don't you ever vote lola

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anyway I'm doin good and I don't think I'm that sick at topicals anymore if I tried maybe I could be but this piece I key'd to fast.

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Voted For: Paranoid

Mystic- Your verse had a nice storyline. the flow got rough at parts, and your multis were rather weak. you had ight voca. decent drop.

Paranoid- good verse, you had nice vocab. with deep imagery, i liked your vocab. and your multis were better than mystic.

V/ paranoid, props to both.

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Iight this was a good battle to me....I liked both a lot...Mystic,Tha onlii thing i really didnt like was that very last line but nothin major...It seemed like Paranoid had a nice vocab in tha first 4 lines and tha last 4 linez but in tha whole verse itself i would give you a 5/10...I would give Mystic an 8/10 b/c it felt like his was a lil more detailed and his vocab was pretty much equal through tha whole verse...But nice job to both,keep doin what you do...no hate to either.all love...HOLLA!!!

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

MC
Your Drop Was Very Staright To The Climax I must Say and Very Direct But Yet You Supplied Some nice Imagery And That Was Nice ....You Came Quite Original As Far As Your Storyline goes and You Stayed On Topic All the Way Through You Held A Solid Vocab So Id Give You a 7.5/10 Very nice piece Man.

Paranoid
Your piece was very deep but You Came Quit Simplistic But Your Imagery was Alright But Like I said i think That You Came a little simple its like the effort was lost in your piece but it was nice this was a close battle I Can say that but I dont think That You came out on top of this battle considering the fact that your drop looked a little on the rushed/ lazy side of things *no hate* im just votin

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

para-your verse was short but sweet, you had nice vocab and flow...i like how you used a hook for your verse pretty dope...but i think you lacked a good idea...for it...i kinda expected this to happen on the real....up on emotion and imagery man ......6.5/10

mystic-your verse was sectioned good...i like your vocabulary and storyline...i didnt expect this and you kept me reading and the suspense was good...you had excellen imagery and good emotion...i think you got this through out a powerfull finish...7.5/10

v/mystic chaos

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Voted For: Paranoid

Para... Your imagery ad emotion was really good... And let me say right now if there is any spelling errors in this vote its cause my N and B buttons dont work well... Emotion was strong for the most part... you stayed on topic and i liked the approach you took with this... Imagery was smoth and deep... liked it alot...

9/10

Mistic Chaos... first off didt like the centering you did with your verse... the imagery was decint you stuck to the topic pretty well ad i enjoyed the approach you took to the subject... emotion could have been better along with the vocab... upp that and you will be better

8/10

V/ Para

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

this was a good battle for real. but i feel that mystic came with a more creative concept even though while saying that i feel he coulda emphasised more on the emotions instead of talking about the poachers, making it obvious that you were an animal; if you had left that out then it would have been a clever twist to be revealed while readeing this if you get what i mean.

admittedly i was feeling the flow in paranoid's piece a bit more however i found mystic's verse more captivating while reading it, which is what i felt won it for him, cos i was reading paranoid's verse but i couldn't get into it too tough cos i've seen that topic approached from that angle so many times.

don't get me wrong though if paranoid had came with the same concept as mystic, using the style he used in his verse, he could quite possibly have even won but he didn't so i ended up feeling mystic more due to his concept.

vs// Mystic

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

mystic chaos-your verse was very intellectual, you had good vocab and good imagery, with ya imagery i could picture it and it was suspensefull throughout ur verse...your emotion was felt a lot....i like how you had a creative verse that wasnt really expected...your last 2 lines were kinda weak..but other thanthat......8.5/10

paranoid-your verse had the potential to be dope...you had a good hook going for you....i just dont think you went into depth with your verse as you should have...you had good vocab...and seemed like you had intentions to do good. overall 7/10

v/mystic chaos.

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Voted For: Paranoid

alright this is how it goes

Structure

i give structure to Paranoid. im feeling the structure on this,. especially how you had the italics in the beginning then it switched as the topical began. Mystic you also had a good structure. but it was much longer. and stretched. Paranoid was much easier to read. therefore i give paranoid structure

flow

again Paranoid gets flow. his shit was quick and easy to follow. The multi's werent good by neither. ya'll need to improve on that. mystic had ok flow. but it was long as hell. you couldn't rap that on a beat. so flow goes to paranoid

imaginary
goes to mystic hands down. paranoid had ok imaginary. but i could accually feel like i was there with mystics drop. it was harmonizing and interesting to read. paranoids was more basic and straight to the point. This was close. but mystic takes this

Vocab

vocab goes to mystic. he had much better word usage. and it sounded alot more matured and better then paranoids. paranoids shit was good but it was all basic wording. so mystic gets vocab

overall its a split decision. but just because of the structure and the storyline imma give it to paranoid..close battle

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