I'll be dropping critique in this fashion from now on: This is the feed I dropped in E.C.'s audio...very extensive...



How did I listen to this track?
Headphones or Speakers: I listened through speakers w/subwoofer

1-10 (10 being the highest)
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Flow: (fluidity/complexity/originality): 6


Rhyming: (Multies/complexity/appeal): 6


Lyrics: (Originality/creativity/complexity): 6



Energy: (intensity/focus): 5



Delivery: (Rhythm/creativity/efficiency): 4

50 pts. maximum>>>>>>Your Score:_____27_______
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Beat selection: decent beat


The Good: the beat, your voice, some lyrics


The bad: your delivery


The ugly: vocal quality


Final Word: this track was lackluster at best because your delivery

is monotone...Plus, your quality took away from the listening

enjoyment


Recommendations: Work on vocal quality...make them more

crisp...use more inflections in your voice.



Final Grade:______C_______
A = 50-40
B = 39-30
C = 29-20
D = 10-19
F = 0-9

should be stickied, in the audio forum, that way good feedback can be given.

Yea should be in audio forum really

but aight critique however um...the grading scheme a lil degrading

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Well, all good ideas start raw. If you feel changes need to be made, things added/removed.

Say so in here.

hahaha...well...this is a complete breakdown

iz how Imma be givin feed from now on


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i like the idea.... but u didnt go very indepth in ur actual critique of his thing.... should have a sentence atleast for the "Good, bad, and Ugly" part

but im prolly gonna steal this... its a good way to have a very formatted form of judgin audios so that people can actually compare their shit to other peoples easier...... that way they might be able to draw their own conclusions of where they are at audio wise...... cuz usually wen people just write out alil paragraph their usually alil too nice, or hatin...

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^^Exactly...and the one i just dropped in 7/3's lil diss thread was a lil more descriptive



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I dont want feed from a Queer

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I don't like it really... just alot of space takin up, but as far as breakin it down its no better than your usual feedback, just alot more shit that means nothing to read through, and easier for the little cheeseheads to copy and paste feedback into shit they never heard. Im sure you'll get lots of pats on the back from kids who never leave feedback though, so good job.

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listen u no pussy gettin jerk...U aint gotta worry about me peepin ur tracks


oops...u don't even drop any

STFU


and 7/3...why the animosity towards my new system?...I'm jus tryna shake shit up...nah mean

enough of the boredom in the Audio Forum!

Actually...My bad Tremendous...U do drop audios...But...everyone seems to think u suck ass


lol


fuck outta here

Hahaha thinking those tracks are my best....hahahahaha Im just learning this audio shit....

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i like it....*sits and hopes drops feed on the track im bout to post*

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