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aight...i'm ready

Moved.. to front lines... T-raz dont qualify for ellite

i gotta question for ya, how long you been known as a trick?/
the only amends you gon be makin, is a truce with my dick/
yo ass aint nothin but a bootleggin midgett/
cake ass playin hopscotch and jimmeny crickett/
get a bat, swing for ya skull and then i hit it/
didn't you know it was your mom that asked me to stick it?/
delahoya thought twice about, steppin to me/
only thing you'll do after this is regret fuckin wit me/
time to lay yo ass down, call it lyrical dismissal/
here comes a bomb for yo ass, droppin ya like a missle
my games up elevated, and you stuck at a medium/
you couldn't rise above me if you were high off o helium/
my words send shock to ya brain, ya ass is feelin delerious/
spittin wack ass shit at me, i'm askin are you fuckin serious/
my words are unreachable, escalated and graduated/
you sittin there face purple, like a fat man constapated

??....how was that

A or T?, Im Before This Geek ~ And Ya Flows More Dry Then Imported Wheat
Floor This Freak, So Fuckin Wak ~ He Could Give His All And Get Nothing Back
Run Ya Trap, And Swallow Teeth ~ U Wanna Win? Then Fuckin Borrow Me
Discard The Weak, T's The Wakkest ~ Like Carbon And Flint, Meet Ya Match Kid
Bleedy Badly, From Ya Head n Face ~ Come With Tracks And I'll Dead Ya Race
Read Ya Waste, Oh...I Meant Verse ~ Now Which Weak Line Will I Hit First
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Blah, that should do it

ten minutes left...you aint posted

not bad...uppin for votes

hey some criticism or votin would be nice

anyone???

help us out man...uppin for votes

vote=AMEND

Better punches but it was close....keep elevatin'

COME POLL VOTE ON THEZE TWO BATTLEZ PLEAZE:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=38073

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=38072

better punches?? aight.....uppin for votes, let's see what everyone else has to say

You wanna talk about punches then it's like this, T-Raz you was throwing plenty of jabs, and most of them didn't connect. Amend was throwing right hooks and ended with a uppercut and hit you with all off em. That sums it up

Vote= Amen

Ya'll come vote on my battle with freestylerhyme
D-dizzle vs. Freestylerhyme

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