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Old 12-19-04, 03:20 PM   #1
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It's unfinished right now.... but i got my boi-Diabolic on this shit.. he produced it for me, it's with the Bone Thugs and Tupac beat.. btw- Thanx boi!
CLICK THIS!!

^then click music, then the top song titled Hold the Ground..

-feedback is much appreciated-

RESPONDED TO THESE.. below..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166522

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165866

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165983

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165389
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Old 12-19-04, 04:39 PM   #2
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I always loved bone thugs...

beat was good.

You were dope .. flow was fine n' dandy.. only bad thing i picked up was your voice sometimes lacked emotion.. but whattya gonna do.. -_-
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Old 12-19-04, 08:31 PM   #3
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appreciate this feedback, bumpin this shit,..... thanx
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Old 12-20-04, 12:51 AM   #4
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Lmfao At Diobolic Thinking He Clue Lololololol Omg Wait Till He Get On Again Im Gonna Whore Him Lolanyways Good Flow And Nice Lyrics Buy You Sounded Way Too Much Like Shawnaa On This Way Too Much And That Killed It For Me
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Old 12-20-04, 03:01 AM   #5
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damn you got that voice for that shit...nice flow too, props.
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Old 12-20-04, 08:41 AM   #6
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cali... shawnna? i disagree WITH YOU TERRIBLY.... but that seem mo' of a compliment..... lol And thanx, so insane..
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Old 12-20-04, 10:33 AM   #7
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I definately agree with you on the beat...liked it!

Your flow was straight to the point,good emotion, was feeling this one for sure...listened to it two times in a row hehe...nah, for real, solid drop and i can't wait to hear more of this stuff cuz it's dope so keep on dropping ya shit...i'll be looking forward to it...

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Old 12-20-04, 10:37 AM   #8
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^thanx fa the feedback, i'll return the favor.......
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Old 12-21-04, 02:44 PM   #9
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uppppppppppin' this shit........ like whoa........
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Old 12-21-04, 04:16 PM   #10
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Lmfao At Diobolic Thinking He Clue




ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh shut yo ass up....
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Old 12-21-04, 04:25 PM   #11
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beat is hott...

but i honestly thought u was spitting a long ass hook....

i cuaght on when it was done u was pitting ya verse, i couldnt even really hear what u were saying neither.....

work on ya presence, and clarity, other then that nice flow and good voice.....
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Old 12-21-04, 04:39 PM   #12
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this beat fits ur style.........i think the vocals should raised a lil bit and u need to up ur emotion other than that i enjoyed it .....stay up grl
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^^word, thanx y'all.............. i kno what i need to focus on more now.. thanx......
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Old 12-21-04, 08:08 PM   #14
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Listening..

Beat is good.. or course..

Flow is pretty good throughout the track..

At times it seems like you could have used a little more emotion, but its all good..
Breath control was good..
Quality was alright..

Overall, pretty nice shit so far..

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Old 12-21-04, 08:32 PM   #15
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word, i will......... much appreciated...... ....
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