I'm going like 16-20 lines. Cool, and good luck.

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You my wanna post first then.
Otherwise I'm going atleast 40.

Cool. 40 lines sounds good to me.


Links...here ya go...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228916
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228901
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228904
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228914
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228899

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It's no surprise I am dropping first again.


So, you wanted 40 lines... you got it. You wack fucker, just because I've had two other battles requiring 24 and 40 lines... don't mean I can't drop another 40 on you.
So look, I don't really know you... but I'm still gonna fucking destroy you, you fucking FAT PIECE OF SHIT!!!

Check it,
Kill me. . make me a ghost, buster. ‘Coz I mean, ya know.. damn
I’m gonna have to be ^………….^ one of them. .
. .if I hope to destroy the Stay Puft Marshmellow Man!
I won’t hold back when I give you a fatherly beating here. .
So the only belt you’ll be taking is the one I thrash across ya rear!
I’ve got this locked up. . its easy when I bust a flow. .
Cause ure verse has so many flaws. .
. .it’d make the empire state building look like a bungalow!
Kid’s known to pic battle. . but I’ll keep it to textin’ rough
Cause I ain’t gotta post pics of Chrit to win – his verses are ugly enough.
The win is mine dick. . I’m known to grab cats, stomp ‘n’ hit ‘em
And you come under par so consistently. .
. .you could own practically every golfing competition!
I’m a phenom, like the Undertaker. . and I’m known to bring the hurt
So I’ll kill you, set up the tombstone – then pile-drive ya body into the dirt!
This kid needs telling he’s gettin’ a beating. . ya see his memories thin
So someone just give Chrit a call. .
. .and let him know that’s the condition I’ll be leaving him in.
Ya don’t deserve to be in this league. . so I’ll keep this rippin’ quick foo. .
But I am hopin’ that you go all out. .
. .and fucking take ya wack dissin’ with you!
You’re gettin’ beaten and battered g. . this’ll be an amazing bout to see
Cause I’ll be droppin’ you in such a quick time player. .
. . even Apple will come vote for me.
Look, Chrit’s a big fan of TV. . so fuck this battle then. .
I’ll admit, you was gonna take the W, B – until it merged with UPN.
You got an untouched record. . but I still won’t give you long to live
So you can shout ure win count all you want. .
. . and I’ll show you the golf club I’ll beat you with.
I’m hittin’ you with a frogsplash. . ‘n’ this ain’t even my wrestlin’ match slim
But you can still call me Superfly. . the way I just Snuka move in!
I ain’t statin’ that I’m the best. . I’m just showin’ folk who’s the worse. .
And in the end, you’ll be gettin’ served by NF. .
. .cause that’s just how voters’ll be gradin’ ya verse!
I’m known to bloody up the joint. . so Chrit could be about to get whipped
And this battle’ll could get violent like a Japanese cartoon. .
. .anime just GET HIS ASS KICKED!
Dude ure thick. . and my styles confusing when I rip it. .
So I’ll be leaving you stumped – without even playing cricket.
God-Like… yea right, girls don’t fuck with this head. .
Cause his 2nd coming. . is the fucking longest he’s lasted in bed!
Wanna start beef with me. . well I guess I’ll be the bigger guy. .
And bury the hatchet right now – straight into ure fucking eye.
You’re a fucking homo, faggot. In ure sig’s where the facts are at
I know my proof may appear sketchy. .
. . but dude, YOU EVEN LOOK GAY IN THAT!!
I hate paedophiles. . so I guess I’ll keep the battering thin,
Cause I’d be more than happy to make C sore. .
. . but he’d get too excited about having kids ride him!
Yeh, I beat on the poor folk. . and I know you’re a beggar, hell. .
I’ve socked you so many times. .
. .I’m surprised ya ain’t asked me to shoe and clothe you as well.


Done.

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you know what's funny? i used that line last week with the same type of setup but i got mimesis to edit the verse out.

if i didnt know any better i'd say you saw my verse and took the concept.

i see it now.. "OMG. that concept is SOOOO old. its just a flip!!"

dotGod is strong so this wrestling fan is long gone
Gone from flippin concepts to given 'em swantons
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I see no evil here... just a faggot hurtin
^^^But thats the reason I'm raising Kane on ur verses
Reppin' Goldberg? I guess it fits in a way
All hype, a lil skill, but fucking nothing 't say
Its all played, so dont get caught mockin me punk
How you postin 3 lines?...
...and still have flow thats choppy as fuck
Too pussy for an ego, so I'll bash N with a stop sign
N leave this chicken battered 'n put on the menu at Popeyes
Duke's a strong cat, ego's growing, but not knocking ur hustle
Cuz now keepin ya head up... is takin massive amounts of muscle
N, I know ya fragile, ya whole persona is so fake
I'll handle you with gloves... to make sure my hand wont break
Ya skinny fuck, takin Meth, aint nobody fearin you
you've come wack... ^ since he died and you ran outta material
Kid is down n out, you got clout? Bitch keep clownin...
...n rubbernecking while I rap some wire around it
I'm astounded... how much this geek needs fans...
Went from smoking herb... to being the weed, man
Get down on both knees... You winning? Hoe please
Dont hang your head in shame... I want that bitch for a trophy
I'm sound bombin on duke, It's like a musical score
My hooks will make your head nod, then connect with the floor
I'm violent to fags, so when I'm bashin this wack cat
He'll take more kicks to the balls than stoner's hacky sacks
Dont talk ya'self up chump, you've never been banging
So in this fight...
...I'll rope a dope, then just leave the kid hanging
Faggot... keep cryin... but I just pummled this mark
'n left his eyes runnin'... out of fear of the dark
Son, I've got your number, Bout to cause some serious swelling...
...When I box the shit out ya, just like ya previous dwellings
Homo...
ur the type I despise, so when the fists have been thrown
Everyone'll see the holes in you, like we're exposing a zone
Its my throne... so watch this broke clown
take my belt... unzip my jeans, and go to town
Ur goin down, faggots record is unbalanced...
I'm unbeaten...
...you lose to everyone with atleast SOME talent
For example...
You got 3 battles this week... 'n you'll see the facts kid
When the results look that other league that I'm ranked in




And the first bar isnt feeding... Rush's post is not part of Nicks verse.

But for fun's sake...





Think of your own concepts.

edit will vote in a minute

quantity over quality much?

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links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228904
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228914
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228898
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228901

Kill me. . make me a ghost, buster. ‘Coz I mean, ya know.. damn
I’m gonna have to be ^………….^ one of them. .
. .if I hope to destroy the Stay Puft Marshmellow Man!
I won’t hold back when I give you a fatherly beating here. .
So the only belt you’ll be taking is the one I thrash across ya rear!
Kid’s known to pic battle. . but I’ll keep it to textin’ rough
Cause I ain’t gotta post pics of Chrit to win – his verses are ugly enough.
The win is mine dick. . I’m known to grab cats, stomp ‘n’ hit ‘em
And you come under par so consistently. .
. .you could own practically every golfing competition!
This kid needs telling he’s gettin’ a beating. . ya see his memories thin
So someone just give Chrit a call. .
. .and let him know that’s the condition I’ll be leaving him in.
You’re gettin’ beaten and battered g. . this’ll be an amazing bout to see
Cause I’ll be droppin’ you in such a quick time player. .
. . even Apple will come vote for me.
Look, Chrit’s a big fan of TV. . so fuck this battle then. .
I’ll admit, you was gonna take the W, B – until it merged with UPN.
God-Like… yea right, girls don’t fuck with this head. .
Cause his 2nd coming. . is the fucking longest he’s lasted in bed!
You’re a fucking homo, faggot. In ure sig’s where the facts are at
I know my proof may appear sketchy. .
. . but dude, YOU EVEN LOOK GAY IN THAT!!
I hate paedophiles. . so I guess I’ll keep the battering thin,
Cause I’d be more than happy to make C sore. .
. . but he’d get too excited about having kids ride him!
(20)
v.s

I see no evil here... just a faggot hurtin
^^^But thats the reason I'm raising Kane on ur verses
Duke's a strong cat, ego's growing, but not knocking ur hustle
Cuz now keepin ya head up... is takin massive amounts of muscle
Ya skinny fuck, takin Meth, aint nobody fearin you
you've come wack... ^ since he died and you ran outta material
Get down on both knees... You winning? Hoe please
Dont hang your head in shame... I want that bitch for a trophy
Faggot... keep cryin... but I just pummled this mark
'n left his eyes runnin'... out of fear of the dark
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Overall: nick came with some fire. He had some wack ass shit in a few places. but EVERY time he had a wack bar, he had a fuckin' ill one to follow up that made up for it, and more. overall a really tight verse. good shit. Chrit's verse was pretty good too, but iunno why, but I think I've seen some of those bars at other sites. Iunno if it's just played, or if you recycled them or what. maybe from rBL. cuz I remember seeing that hackey sack line, but iunno i could be wrong. but overall your verse was pretty cool. I just think in the end Nick took it with more hotter punches

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I won’t hold back when I give you a fatherly beating here. .
So the only belt you’ll be taking is the one I thrash across ya rear!
This kid needs telling he’s gettin’ a beating. . ya see his memories thin
So someone just give Chrit a call. .
. .and let him know that’s the condition I’ll be leaving him in.
Ya don’t deserve to be in this league. . so I’ll keep this rippin’ quick foo. .
But I am hopin’ that you go all out. .
. .and fucking take ya wack dissin’ with you!
You’re gettin’ beaten and battered g. . this’ll be an amazing bout to see
Cause I’ll be droppin’ you in such a quick time player. .
. . even Apple will come vote for me.

vs.

Its all played, so dont get caught mockin me punk
How you postin 3 lines?...
...and still have flow thats choppy as fuck

Too pussy for an ego, so I'll bash N with a stop sign
N leave this chicken battered 'n put on the menu at Popeyes
^ you used almost this exact line a couple weeks ago in the L.L.L.

What the fuck, man? Not quoted. Just pointing it out.
Duke's a strong cat, ego's growing, but not knocking ur hustle
Cuz now keepin ya head up... is takin massive amounts of muscle

This is the last time I'll let one of these lines pass, lol.

I'm astounded... how much this geek needs fans...
Went from smoking herb... to being the weed, man

Homo...
ur the type I despise, so when the fists have been thrown
Everyone'll see the holes in you, like we're exposing a zone

Ur goin down, faggots record is unbalanced...
I'm unbeaten...
...you lose to everyone with atleast SOME talent


fuck it vote - chrit.

I'm angry at something. plus chrit came more consistent.

nick constantly fell off.

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I won’t hold back when I give you a fatherly beating here. .
So the only belt you’ll be taking is the one I thrash across ya rear!
This kid needs telling he’s gettin’ a beating. . ya see his memories thin
So someone just give Chrit a call. .
. .and let him know that’s the condition I’ll be leaving him in.
Ya don’t deserve to be in this league. . so I’ll keep this rippin’ quick foo. .
But I am hopin’ that you go all out. .
. .and fucking take ya wack dissin’ with you!
You’re gettin’ beaten and battered g. . this’ll be an amazing bout to see
Cause I’ll be droppin’ you in such a quick time player. .
. . even Apple will come vote for me.

vs

I see no evil here... just a faggot hurtin
^^^But thats the reason I'm raising Kane on ur verses
Duke's a strong cat, ego's growing, but not knocking ur hustle
Cuz now keepin ya head up... is takin massive amounts of muscle
Ya skinny fuck, takin Meth, aint nobody fearin you
you've come wack... ^ since he died and you ran outta material
Get down on both knees... You winning? Hoe please
Dont hang your head in shame... I want that bitch for a trophy
Faggot... keep cryin... but I just pummled this mark
'n left his eyes runnin'... out of fear of the dark
Its all played, so dont get caught mockin me punk
How you postin 3 lines?...
...and still have flow thats choppy as fuck

v-Chrit more consistant

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Dream Cast

Kid’s known to pic battle. . but I’ll keep it to textin’ rough
Cause I ain’t gotta post pics of Chrit to win – his verses are ugly enough.
This kid needs telling he’s gettin’ a beating. . ya see his memories thin
So someone just give Chrit a call. .
. .and let him know that’s the condition I’ll be leaving him in.
Ya don’t deserve to be in this league. . so I’ll keep this rippin’ quick foo. .
But I am hopin’ that you go all out. .
. .and fucking take ya wack dissin’ with you!
You’re gettin’ beaten and battered g. . this’ll be an amazing bout to see
Cause I’ll be droppin’ you in such a quick time player. .
. . even Apple will come vote for me.
Look, Chrit’s a big fan of TV. . so fuck this battle then. .
I’ll admit, you was gonna take the W, B – until it merged with UPN.

I’m known to bloody up the joint. . so Chrit could be about to get whipped
And this battle’ll could get violent like a Japanese cartoon. .
. .anime just GET HIS ASS KICKED!
vs

Too pussy for an ego, so I'll bash N with a stop sign
N leave this chicken battered 'n put on the menu at Popeyes
Duke's a strong cat, ego's growing, but not knocking ur hustle
Cuz now keepin ya head up... is takin massive amounts of muscle

Kid is down n out, you got clout? Bitch keep clownin...
...n rubbernecking while I rap some wire around it

Get down on both knees... You winning? Hoe please
Dont hang your head in shame... I want that bitch for a trophy

vote : nick......yea ive heard alot of chrits verse somewhere...prolly recycled it..but i judged it as if he didnt recycle n nick still won..nick had alotta wack stuff every other line but had alot of shit that was ill as hell..same for Chrit..pretty good battle..