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Old 05-27-05, 08:16 AM   #1
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Street Soldiers (hook needed)

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ight, i got the hook sorted mad dog is doing it so... jus leave feed on this and ill edit with the full version when it is done thanks.


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Old 05-27-05, 08:19 AM   #2
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Old 05-27-05, 01:14 PM   #3
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Old 05-27-05, 03:27 PM   #4
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Like ya beat... Delivery is coo... Lyrics have meaning but if you would of had more delivery it would of been a lil better 2 me fambo... but the beat sounds like it's easy to ride and u rode it good... easy
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Old 05-27-05, 05:31 PM   #5
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ight i appriciate the feed uppin for more..

and sheif if i read the post properly it sez mad dog is donig it he offered before u fam sorry
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Old 05-28-05, 06:07 AM   #6
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Old 05-28-05, 02:49 PM   #7
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Old 05-28-05, 11:03 PM   #8
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relax on uppin this shit... damn homie.

flow sounded like it was good, but your vocals are real low/ hard to understand, I think its half your delivery, half mixdown- but work on that, cuz I can't feel it if I can't understand what you sayin. This is pretty dope for what I've heard from english cats on rv, but work on making them words come across more, cuz right now im ??? on pretty much the whole track.
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ight ill redo it later and make my vocals better thnx for the feed
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Old 05-30-05, 07:40 AM   #10
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i like this beat,i dont remember where i heard it tho,lyrics are very low,nice flow,nice quality,have difficulty hearing some words,so whos doing your chorus? anyway peace man
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Old 05-30-05, 10:09 AM   #11
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hmmmm this shit is defo not as good as your verse on the thoughts track u dropped on...ur flow falls off a lot more, lyrical content is good, but sounds a lil wack cos u jus aint spittin em nicely, quality is still a lot better than it used to be...b interestin 2 hear this when u re-dun this wid the MD chorus...stay up AC
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Old 05-30-05, 12:31 PM   #12
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really good flow.... im sure you put alot into makin this song so rap like it....put some more emotion ya kno...good lyrics tho keep doin you...

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beat is ight

quality bad, emotion def needs to be upped, mic presence needs to be upped
Hard to understand some words, practice ur flow and delevery a few times b4 u record.
def need some work
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Old 05-30-05, 02:48 PM   #14
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Old 05-31-05, 07:22 AM   #15
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Beat is nice...flow is ok..you need breath control when you spit I kno where you be taking breath and when you run out..lyrics aiight..good drop
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