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10-15-03, 03:56 PM | #1 | |||||||
Venom Personified
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Venom Personified
IP: B8B9 BB7D
Ayo This is Kobra n all you mother fuckers better believe I'm here to stay reppin' WarLords 2003 'till Judgement decends upon all yo' asses. It goes like this
The name's Kobra aka rap's number 1 soilder you can't topple me or my crew i thought i already told ya/ I'm killin you here with more witnesses than Jehovah Im lookin like a Bently you barely compare to a rover// Feel the poison bitch here feel my wrath fuck the industry especially Shady/Aftermath/ After Em has gone i bet you cant tell me whats after that 50 Cent, what can you buy with that// Florida look out I'm injectin Poison Venom One can't stop Im raisin hell within the main body of hip-hop/ I posess skill that even Def Jam couldn't stop fuck you haters i'l make it straight to the top// When when i make it I'll stick ma middle finger up tell Knightshade n The Productions i dont give a fuck/ Face it bitch if you cant bite your fuckin ruined you suck you might aswell admit it your chicken go ahead cluck// I rep the WarLord jersey until the day that i die Im tellin the truth the general public I'd never lie/ If you try to fuck up the WL you'll get a reply cuz i'l show you that venom is somethin' i truly personify// Feedback appriciated |
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10-15-03, 04:07 PM | #2 | |||||||
Banned
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IP: B20F 67F7
sound!!!
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10-15-03, 04:31 PM | #3 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: B8A8 9009
I'm killin you here with more witnesses than Jehovah
^lol liked that..... yo this was good a bit short...but i feel to show ur skills more would be to do more of a topical or themed verse.....nice stuff Kobraaaaaaaaaaaaaa 1 |
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10-15-03, 04:47 PM | #4 | |||||||
Venom Personified
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IP: CA8F 3B94
thanks for the feedback uppin..
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10-15-03, 07:37 PM | #5 | ||||||
Guest
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IP: DCEF 7C9A
Shit repping WL to the fullest. Who are you 2pac? catching beef for anything. Thats all I like rhymes Uncut and Hardcore, not sugar-coating shit, You got skills, Imma bring up a topic so we can do a collab playboy. Jehova shit had me crack-a-lacking...
uno |
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10-16-03, 02:19 PM | #6 | |||||||
Venom Personified
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IP: C444 58BC
uppin thanks for the feedback
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10-16-03, 02:59 PM | #7 | |||||||
BANNED: Cheater
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Face it bitch if you cant bite your fuckin ruined you suck you might aswell admit it your chicken go ahead cluck//
like it made me laugh...... big ups.. keep spittin....... |
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10-18-03, 05:45 AM | #8 | |||||||
Venom Personified
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IP: C444 58BC
uppin
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10-18-03, 02:34 PM | #9 | |||||||
1E
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
yeah thought this was good, very battle like, and forward
thought the structure was ok but it seemed a bit stretched in places....but nice drop! |
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10-19-03, 03:39 PM | #10 | ||||||
Banned
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IP: 2CC9 1AF8
^^^^^^ignore the comments above...the rhymes were basic and this generally wasnt good.....im putting it nice by saying when i read this verse..i think of heather.i.deepthroat
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10-19-03, 08:10 PM | #11 | |||||||
Banned 4 biting
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
it'd make a better audio
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10-19-03, 09:47 PM | #12 | |||||
Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP: 399E F0FD
this was a nice short piece i was feelin it. and its about time someone actually reps a crew instead of being in like 10 diffrent crews. big ups playa.
holla |
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10-20-03, 03:33 PM | #13 | |||||||
Venom Personified
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IP: 2EE0 0D06
thanx for the feedback appriciate me
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11-06-03, 08:22 PM | #14 | |||||||
Venom Personified
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IP: 7073 F878
uppin
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