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YoungSoulja 1 16.67%
Lawless (Hs) 5 83.33%
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Old 12-13-04, 10:37 PM   #1
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YoungSoulja vs Lawless (Hs)

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Battle Rules:

6 to 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 1

Check in by: 12-16-04 at 10:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
 
Old 12-13-04, 10:37 PM   #2
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Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-04 10:37 PM.
 
Old 12-13-04, 10:38 PM   #3
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come on dog you spit first and then I will reply iight
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NOTABLE WINS
*Golden Cat (KO)
*Young Soulja
* Sire (ND)

NOTABLE LOSSES
* Black Queen

NO DECISIONS
* ~Sire~
 
Old 12-14-04, 04:43 PM   #4
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YoungSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-14-04 04:43 PM.
 
Old 12-14-04, 04:44 PM   #5
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yo,yo,yo,i challeged dis cat and he accepted/
dat was da 1st mistake he made,now he'll meet rejection/
mistake #2,dis nigga got Hitman on his sig/
i guess he wanted the world to know wat me&his girl planned&did/
da ransom of 1000g's/
and compared to dis battle,imma be livin rich and make him feel a peeve/
dae callin me da slick killah,but im his epicdemic/
and mah skills be so ill dat dae left dis boi beliemich/
he gotta cough and spit up his flows/
he needed mo' tyme to rhyme----------i just thought time just froze/

haha good luck nigga
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Old 12-14-04, 04:45 PM   #6
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c'mon nigga post....upppin
fo votes,so wat yall think on a niggas first battle i think i did good
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Old 12-14-04, 05:02 PM   #7
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nigga could you spit a verse before you ask people to vote kidd... damn... fuck it i'll go
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NOTABLE WINS
*Golden Cat (KO)
*Young Soulja
* Sire (ND)

NOTABLE LOSSES
* Black Queen

NO DECISIONS
* ~Sire~
 
Old 12-14-04, 05:51 PM   #8
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young soulja i'm ya Admiral it's affirmative i'm burnin' you/
fucc rap you a nap I must put a perm through/

when you spit the whole state's booin' you/
battlin me you'll fucc around and catch a Who Kid? like G unit do/

i'ma be nice and ASK if you ready bitch/
then i'll make sure you get a Timbaland like Ginuwine and Missy Elliot/

the boy a g bottom line jus avoid me/
he couldn't deliver me beef if he was a Papa John employee/

you must be confused soulja you too lame to fucc wit me/
i'll disrespect you publicly and leave you cryin' like a parent denied joint custody/

I'm jus respondin to the battle we neva had/
from the beginnin' you was gettin stomped on like stairs when a teenager mad/

nigga i'm 1st that makes you the last draft/
if you gotta click... they gon cut yo ass like an 11th grade mathematics class/

these flows I fucc wit will dismantle ya mental/
and if you get on my bad side i'ma put lead in you like u was a mechanical pencil/

i'ma beast from the southeast... let me see you talk shit witout teeth/
this BITCH is a vegetarian he neva been about beef/

battlin' me? he must figure "fuck It I ain't nuttin alive"/
all I know is my rhymes is stabbin at cats like Buck at the vibes/

yo...
in case u wonderin I meant to put 6 to 10 bars so when you drop put 6 to 10 BARS iight
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NOTABLE WINS
*Golden Cat (KO)
*Young Soulja
* Sire (ND)

NOTABLE LOSSES
* Black Queen

NO DECISIONS
* ~Sire~
 
Old 12-14-04, 09:28 PM   #9
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Voted For: YoungSoulja

Both verses were wack in my opinion.

You came with stronger punches andhe didn't even follow the rules that he posted... a mistake in the rules don't matter unless you pre-writ your verse...

Lawless, your structure was better buy your punches werent nearly as powerfull.
Both could elevate, but my votes for souljah
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Old 12-14-04, 09:31 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)

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Yo Lawless He Said Ten Lines Fool


Battle Dq'd Young Gets An Amatik Win Peace
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Old 12-15-04, 07:29 AM   #11
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I know what it says I wrote it but I meant to put bars instead of that.. im'a trim it when I get on later.... thanks for ya vote but it doesn't count.... you gotta do it in categories not freepost or that system thing will come and wipe out all the votes and make us recount that's what happened in my battle wit some nigga I can't remember who but it's still open VOTE....lol
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NOTABLE WINS
*Golden Cat (KO)
*Young Soulja
* Sire (ND)

NOTABLE LOSSES
* Black Queen

NO DECISIONS
* ~Sire~
 
Old 12-16-04, 05:59 PM   #12
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uuuuupppppin come on yall come vote
who got dis,me or him
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Old 12-19-04, 08:12 PM   #13
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c'mon RV can we get some votes,out dis cAT TO SLEEP
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Old 12-20-04, 04:56 PM   #14
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look,RV,all i need is 4 mo votes,cAN WE PLEASE
get some votes over here
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Old 12-20-04, 06:44 PM   #15
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

I'm gonna have to go with Lawless on this one...

This was not a very good battle in my opinion. you both could have come harder with the punches and the wordplay and personals. You two had the multis down which adds a spice to the reading and Lawless got plenty of metas in there but...both flows were off due to too many stretched bars.u may have a lot to say but damn..u should shorten it..the punches weren't so hard and the vocab wasnt either...those should bothe be worked on as well....elevation is the key and practice makes perfect so..keep droppin and battlin.peaceezy...

my vote=Lawless for having metas which in my opinion this battle came down to....peaceezy
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