RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases > Diss Tracks
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 12-10-05, 07:18 PM   #1
Daubs
NO SURRENDER
 
Daubs's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,604
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Salford
Status: Offline
CS then C L's (CS DISS)

IP: AC2A 692A

Think your something special...
...FUCK YOU ALL.

Keystyle bitches..

Fuck ya queen pin..il just pin the charge on her,tite bitch
So she willapeer wit a high voltage..passing thru her eyelids
You cant denie this, im talkin the truth, fuckin imposters
The only real chrimies...pfft, you actually having a roster
If i lost a battle to your text heads, id be squirmin livid
I mean the whole lot are so wank, they make Narc look illy
Oreo and metafo must still be docterin the wounds,you heard ye?
cause them battles i won werent look..they were state up murder
But still we all know calis a fat cunt, probaby by eating chips
suprisin thing is he didnt eat shit..
..he must just like his dick
UNF, fuckin fag drops audios and the kid thinks were feelin him
But nobody would wanna B.Daniel.he sounds like he spits on helium
CS, if you gotta such an ill technique..whats been happenin dudes
the only thing more inactive than SV...was the whole fuckin crew
Thats not recent shit, thats the past 6 months you silly pricks
The same 6 months that Mystic chaos has been jumpin on my dick
Your crews intermental shit..na mean? Fuck what you were told
your topical units only holding it down til mentalz hits the road
Makeveli Trained so hard a puddle appeared round where he skipped
that wasnt a puddle of sweat, it was jizz from riding Fathoms dick
Thats gay shit, like the exexex chiefs into,he luvs the dick man
And chymera soon agreed and explained "its cause im sick.i.am"
Thesinnister thing about it, is that willa thinks he's good too
but thats the cat who tried out for LL and got a big "FUCK YOU"
You cant fight this, im droppin bombs in your little crew thing
cause CS will C L's..and not just in the battles they be losing
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-10-05, 07:21 PM   #2
Daubs
NO SURRENDER
 
Daubs's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,604
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Salford
Status: Offline
IP: AC2A 692A

__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 06:54 AM   #3
Daubs
NO SURRENDER
 
Daubs's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,604
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Salford
Status: Offline
IP: AC2A 692A

upppppppppppppp.
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 08:35 AM   #4
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
chip's Avatar
 
Posts: 754
Joined: Jul 2005
From: 614 (Ohio)
Status: Offline
IP: 4FD6 E3FB

ummm.......... ok........ wow @ me not knowing half of those ppl, i need chat in the lounge more....... flow was pretty good for a keystyle, but rhyme scheme was terrible unless u slur the words or something...... i always like being shouted in a rhyme cuz it makes me feel important, so props on that..... umm, ok diss, but i'm too new to CS to understand most of the personals i guess..... haha, i'm definitely gonna try to get CS to do a reply, i need some practice on text anywayz.......
__________________


"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled
Send a message via AIM to chip   Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 10:04 AM   #5
Zone Out
Power Hungry
 
Zone Out's Avatar
 
Posts: 5,430
Joined: May 2004
From: Westside Detroit
Status: Offline
Audio Record: 5-1
IP: AEB4 27D2

I remember when I used to do text disses
damn, has it really been that long?
__________________
www.myspace.com/zoneout1

Rap Extraordinaire

Quote:
Originally Posted by strobe
If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
Send a message via AIM to Zone Out   Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 01:21 PM   #6
Mentalz
The Topical Juggernaut
 
Mentalz's Avatar
 
Posts: 885
Joined: May 2003
From: The Write Side of The Brain
Status: Offline
Text Record: 6-3
IP: CCF3 0222

Not bad at all for a keystyle. Decent flow and punches, nothing spectacular though. But then again, you said it was a keystyle.

Quote:
UNF, fuckin fag drops audios and the kid thinks were feelin him
But nobody would wanna B.Daniel.he sounds like he spits on helium


Prolly the hottest punch, in my opinion.
__________________
Blow It - Topical

-=Respect List=-
Crhyme Sindicate

The unexamined life is not worth living.
Send a message via AIM to Mentalz   Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 01:28 PM   #7
Daubs
NO SURRENDER
 
Daubs's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,604
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Salford
Status: Offline
IP: AC2A 692A

safe,

yeah i copy and pasted the roster from cs into note pad, then wrote a punch about each person etc.
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 01:59 PM   #8
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
Posts: 857
Joined: Jun 2005
From: bronx
Status: Offline
Text Record: 9-7
IP: 9607 4CB8

Not Bad Daubs I Think For A KeysTyle this was preety Good but why all the hate man,and like mentals said that Unf line was your best line....1
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 02:00 PM   #9
Daubs
NO SURRENDER
 
Daubs's Avatar
 
Posts: 10,604
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Salford
Status: Offline
IP: AC2A 692A

Im just makin stuff interesting, mentalz will understand.
__________________
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 02:04 PM   #10
NaRc-UzI
GeNeRaL
 
Posts: 857
Joined: Jun 2005
From: bronx
Status: Offline
Text Record: 9-7
Exclamation

IP: 9607 4CB8

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daubs
Im just makin stuff interesting, mentalz will understand.

I feel You Man and its all Love Fam
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 06:36 PM   #11
Lampejo
Perco-o
 
Lampejo's Avatar
 
Posts: 165
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 28AD 5545

Im kind of disspointed... The only punch at me wasn't even an accurate one
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 06:43 PM   #12
Po' Wit.
All these Dead Presidents
 
Posts: 657
Joined: Nov 2005
From: Ole' Harrisburg Pa
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
IP: B3D0 327D

Honestly, you coulda have came harder. You did have a couple good lines in there. Your closer wasnt all that strong, nor was the opener. But overall about a 5/10 in disses.

But, the line that had my name in it..... is this a diss towards me? because me and Mak dont even talk on this site lol......
__________________
- Chryme Syndicate -
so
- S T F U -

My Literature
Send a message via AIM to Po' Wit.   Reply With Quote
Old 12-11-05, 09:44 PM   #13
King Solo
Skadoosh!
 
King Solo's Avatar
 
Posts: 17,012
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 9DB1 64D6

meh, an average keystyle

nothing too hot, i'll be honest I expected a lot better...

you had a couple of decent lines in there, but overall the verse was chocked full of mediocre lines and really gay fucking disses, personally i dont get people in this thread, that UNF line started well I guess, but it was wack as fuck for a nameplay....way too obvious with the B.Daniel shit.....i would break the whole thing down, but overall it was weak....

but i ain't gonna make a big deal out of it, i know daubs can drop fire when he wants to so I guess I'll let this shit slide....

and i'll hit you a link soon when i rip up CS....
__________________
Send a message via AIM to King Solo Send a message via MSN to King Solo   Reply With Quote
Old 12-12-05, 02:12 AM   #14
Lay-z
HAHAHAHAH!..i onno
 
Lay-z's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,582
Joined: Jun 2005
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 5-2
IP: 3240 794D

cool i mean sex..lmao...weerd

anywho decent keystyle, i've seen better from you before.
__________________

GFX Record
52-8-39KO

Send a message via AIM to Lay-z   Reply With Quote
Old 12-20-05, 08:18 AM   #15
Lil C
Middle Weight
 
Lil C's Avatar
 
Posts: 511
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Detroit
Status: Offline
Text Record: 4-9
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 11AF 50EC

pretty dope if ya ask me.....it may b betta on audio but i dunno.....good wordplay, flow, n structure....def got ya point across.......keep up da good work...1
Send a message via AIM to Lil C Send a message via Yahoo to Lil C   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 07:58 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.