Props to both for the battle both took totally different views.

Sarcasm-your main detail here was 'Detail. your imagery was the nice thang about it
& i enjoyed how your flow matched your sense of Detail.
the story was pretty vague but I felt like this was more thoughts than storyline

Key-Nice story. I felt myself gettin into it a lot but that odd moment findin
myself dropping off, but it was a lil diffent from the sad stories I have read
even tho I did fall off sumtimes you still gave a good edge and Jimmy was
a well thought of character. Props to for digging that out.

V/Sarcasm-I took Detail & Imagery over storyline in this one
pz

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I'm not being the deciding vote.
I am giving this until I go to sleep tonight, then it will be closed, and be a tie.
get voters.

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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis