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View Poll Results: Typical vs phatinum | |||
phatinum | 0 | 0% | |
Typical | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-01-04, 07:36 PM | #1 |
Apollyon
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Typical vs phatinum
IP: 0ABC 464B
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08-01-04, 07:37 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Typical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 07:37 PM.
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08-01-04, 07:46 PM | #3 | |
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IP: CD35 672F
phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 07:46 PM.
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08-01-04, 07:50 PM | #4 | |
Light Weight
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IP: CD35 672F
Hey yo ill crack open up ya skull like a can of beans
watch out im a open up your thoughts b spillin ya dreams I heard you suck dicks till you scream bleed time 4 a daily feed You fuck boys annually with speed there’s no need 4 dis greed Its only dick but I know you’re a pussy with no dick inside Ill rip you open like a young boy about to die choke now cause you bout to cry no point cryin say your big cause you got more pubic hairs then a lion stop lying times up tick tock o smash ya spine cored in shock peace out nigga im shooting ya wid my bullets on lock |
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08-01-04, 08:06 PM | #5 |
Apollyon
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
ayo its time to bring the lesson in session/
dis nigga got murdered 7 times n still aint make it to heaven/* dis nigga claim he from da ghetto actin like he so hood/ i guess da NG in his crew name stands for no good/ for real do u spit da worst verse i read/ da only thing phat will b ur lips when my eyes get red/ he think he spit big but he aint hit puberdy/ his ryhmes r nice i spit brutaly/ trust me dude u booty cheeks/ get ya ass back to school before u move me 2 callin truency |
08-01-04, 09:13 PM | #6 | |
the medicine man
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This was feedback posted for phatinum
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
you need to workon some things such as ya structure is hard to read, try lining up the rhyming words but you'll get better with time
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08-01-04, 09:40 PM | #7 |
Apollyon
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IP: 28AD 5545
upin>>>>..............................................
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08-02-04, 11:39 AM | #8 | |
Daillest Nigga~~NOK~~
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Typical
both need to get better but my vote goes to typical cuz i was feelin his punches and flow more....eve the the 5th & 6th lines was a little whack..overall his verse was better than the other guys
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08-02-04, 02:30 PM | #9 |
Apollyon
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IP: 28AD 5545
upin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-02-04, 07:46 PM | #10 |
Apollyon
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IP: 28AD 5545
can some one please vote on this.
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08-02-04, 10:13 PM | #11 |
Apollyon
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IP: C1DA C961
upin
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08-02-04, 10:34 PM | #12 | |
Banned: Spamming
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IP: AF9B 73D9
Voted For: Typical
Flow: phatinum Structure: phatinum Punches: Typical Personalz: Typical Vocab: Typical VOTE: Typical For a text battle phat's verse didnt rhyme well... Creativity: Typical Enjoyment: Typical |
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08-03-04, 11:59 AM | #13 |
Apollyon
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IP: 28AD 5545
upin 4 votes
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08-03-04, 03:39 PM | #14 |
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
Voted For: Typical
im gonna havta give this ta typical cause his punches were connecting ok personal bout the record thingy,i dint like the fake personal bout the ng thing..he dosent have those letters in his name...nothing really special in this battle...phat i could'nt give it ta ya cause 3 of your lines dint ryme..your structures pickin up...keep tryin dawg..work on your punches n you'll win some battles...pc hit 1 of these up http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137724 me vs 650 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106 me vs sten.cell http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138359 me vs gran..chi
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08-03-04, 05:00 PM | #15 | |
the medicine man
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IP: BF45 37DB
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