10 lines minimum
16 lines max
5 votes to win
3-0 KO
u spit first

and yes people i kno i didn't set up a poll...it's bullshit

check in, drop, and i'll come after

have fun

Im vicious, dilicous, Bitches like you always tryna get-this
Ya punches fist-less, Wacken off to ' taktics ' sigs leave-n you spit-liss
Your on my hit-list, no re-grets of beating you, its a bet
Im tryna to get elite, So Why should I battle a falsley-claimed-vet
Get-bent, Your a hood-linch... Stealing this kid, call me the Grinch
Play by the rules faggot, why did you know show to Foot-Print

Time To Get Real

I create action, ya a lame in-fraction with style that lacks fashion
You aint even got full punches, this bitch hitting in fractions
Thinkin you somthing hot, yea... This fag has gon Flame-n
Your ' Wits ' at its ' End ' So haven skillz, please stop claim-n
The win your wish-n, your verse no one will mention
I have you flinchen, cant be real, Im leaving your story in Fiction
So in-vest in my rhymes, other-wise your stayin none as less
To ugly to get bitches, even then Fuckin ya-self is the only way to In-sest
I pra-mote mean, Your thoughts of success stoped at dreams
How can you be strong " Rexic ", Your flow aint even got protien
~1~


My Rule, No Feeding off my verse
G/L hommie...

My edit was to take out the explination

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Sit Down And Take A Seat Kid, Class Is In Session
I'm Exposing Him For What He's Worth, Like Taxicab Confessions
I'll Take Tha Leg And Give You Tha Boot, You're 3rd Rate
I'll Rid You Of Your Chances Quickly, Like Early Stages Of Prostate
Take A Long Look At Elite, You Won't Make Tha List
This Was Your Second Chance, You've Come Up Short And Missed
Revoked Ya Application. .I Can't Let Tha Crap In
I Don't Kno What's Worse. .His Verses Or Macho Man Rappin
You Don't Stand A Chance...
...Winning Shouldn't Be One Of Your Worries
I'm Leaving This Kid Speechless, Like Tha Helen Keller Story
As Many Times He Says It, You'd Think He Really Gets Serious
He Thinks He Can Hang With Elite, LOL, And I Thought I Was Getting Delirious
I'm Jus Getting In Tha Swing Of Things, You're Tha First Victim To Show
Take This Loss As A Lesson, Now Get Back In Line Hoe

fuck it

um yeah...do i really have to explain?...

okay..i will...


first of all...High-class...after u misspelled the 2nd word into ur
battle i was like...'um...its gonna be one of those'...then i was
hopin that u would turn it around..but i seen the hyphens-in-ur-
punches....thats frontlines material....some of ur punches was
okay...didn't really do anything for me....

Jay...ur shit was on point..good structure...nice setups followed
wit good punches...i liked it...


therefore...

my vote goes to Knuckles....

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Blessed wit Skillz

1-0 my way

13th- So you judge battles by how words are spelled? Fuck out of here with your bull shit. I miss spell um, because I write the verses fast. I dont sit there and fuckin worry about spelling.
Vote is a Vote, it aint hate or nothing, but it wasnt explained well, so please next time do a better job of that...
( If your elevated or elite, explain it like your are then... )
But, UPPIN FOR MORE #1

0-1 Jay

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High Class: since this battle is for elite application, im telling you that you are average elevated front lines material, but not elite.
Pana definitely took this with some better punches. high class i realize you had metties throughout your verse. . but i didnt think they were very good ones. some were unneeded, and some did not rhyme well enough with the previous mettie. for example:

its a bet / falsley-claimed-vet : i had to go back & re-read to make it flow & it still only flowed averagely.

create action / lame in-fraction / lacks fashion : none of those "metties" rhyme with the mettie before. create action / lame in fraction : altho they have the same # of syllables, they just dont go together. lame in fraction / lacks fashion: lacks doesnt rhyme with lame, and fashion is a bad rhyme for fraction.

Punches for high class: your punches were really, non-existant. didnt have much in the way of punches, and the ones i did notice were played. and calling those a punch was stretching it.

Jay Pana:

Sit Down And Take A Seat Kid, Class Is In Session
I'm Exposing Him For What He's Worth, Like Taxicab Confessions
an ok punch. nothing wrong structurally with this bar.

I'll Take Tha Leg And Give You Tha Boot, You're 3rd Rate
I'll Rid You Of Your Chances Quickly, Like Early Stages Of Prostate
a good punch, again nohing wrong structurally.


Take A Long Look At Elite, You Won't Make Tha List
This Was Your Second Chance, You've Come Up Short And Missed
Revoked Ya Application. .I Can't Let Tha Crap In
I Don't Kno What's Worse. .His Verses Or Macho Man Rappin
filler, but. . most of his verse was filler so it didnt hurt you winning

You Don't Stand A Chance...
...Winning Shouldn't Be One Of Your Worries
I'm Leaving This Kid Speechless, Like Tha Helen Keller Story
doesnt rhyme to well. ok punch .

As Many Times He Says It, You'd Think He Really Gets Serious
He Thinks He Can Hang With Elite, LOL, And I Thought I Was Getting Delirious
I'm Jus Getting In Tha Swing Of Things, You're Tha First Victim To Show
Take This Loss As A Lesson, Now Get Back In Line Hoe

an average punch about elite, followed by filler, but a little funny filler. "get back in line hoe".


pana takes this with not much problem. high class you were alright. and dont bitch at the voters when they break it down. .

High Class=His Verse Was Aite Didn't Really Like It Cause Of The Newbie Shit Of --- After Each Word But His Flow Was Kinda Of Rusty And Punches Weren't That Hot

Jaypana-His Verse Was Funny I Liked Alot Of The Punches He Said Like The Macho Man That Shit Was Funny As Fuck I Liked That And His Flow Was Smoother And Easier To Understand

Vote=Jay

that's 3-0

*closed*

and moved to closed battles. . -feeble