no amount of money could amount to my motivation
cause i have most of my inspiration from anger and seeing love ones taken
to heaven then i have to deal with all this jealousy and hatred
im tired like slavery days of hearing the things they is saying
man i got to get my weight up similiar to being over weighted
and half of these niggas in the industry is overrated
niggas dont wanna see me make it ,like they dont wanna see a old woman naked
so like these hoes giving head my head stay down
im sick of letting these niggas put my day down
so i look for niggas to slide and swing on like a playground
man i got bad days like seeing a gray cloud


i got my head to the sky
with my mouth open wide
with the mic right beside
yup aint nobody messing with me now
got my head to the clouds
screaming f these clowns

i got my head to the sky
with my mouth open wide
with the mic right beside
yup aint nobody messing with me now
got my head to the clouds
screaming f these clowns

this is for the clowns
yall should be using yall time putting on make up
even though being hated is the only reason i wake up
cause seeing me shine is going to have yall depressed like a bad break up
cause ima blow up like after seeing soda shake up
like my career i put two fingers straight up
to show my hater what they made
a small nigga that would blow from a pin like a grenade
everybody is going to have my cd in their house like im a first aid
parents are going to go to my concerts and shows like its a play in first grade
people say you'l grow out of it but ive been through the worst faise
im praying to god everyday and it dont seem like church pays


i got my head to the sky
with my mouth open wide
with the mic right beside
yup aint nobody messing with me now
got my head to the clouds
screaming f these clowns

i got my head to the sky
with my mouth open wide
with the mic right beside
yup aint nobody messing with me now
got my head to the clouds
screaming f these clowns

i dont get alot out of this world cause i dont look my age
but my heads to the sky so i look that way
man i got a dyme mixed with black and white
when i make it ima make it right
cause ima shine so bright people think they seen the light
in the day time i stay with a knife but i stay strapped in the night
cause i can inpersonate god and take ya life
niggas looking at me with hate like i raped dey wife

fuck the nice vocab and metaphors
this is the real reason i chose to be a rapper for
it feels like my mind is trapped with war
to the point i dont respect if that is yours
cause when i put 2 fingers up im scrapping whore
and i aint talkin about the fuck you that will leave faggots sore
all you see on my street is cops at door
cause we all on the same hustle that'l leave pockets warm
if you think im not real you must be misinformed
cause i spit shit that'l make sockets form
the niggas on my block would just be amazed to walk in a prada store
and we here loud things at night like a thunder storm
the rain falls from the sky,like tears from our mothers eye
cause she working a 5 to 5 and still struggling even when my brother try
so now i got a step father so we have help from another guy
saying shit got better would just be another lie
cause more money means more problems
cause i spend my money on the littlest shit like condoms

im sorry i had to cuss alot but this is real talk
rapping is like a movement and nomatter how wack you say i am i still walk
like bone crusher i never get scared ..i got the chilled heart

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This was dope !!! would sound even doper on audio !!! some of your bars were
nice !!

yall should be using yall time putting on make up
even though being hated is the only reason i wake up
cause seeing me shine is going to have yall depressed like a bad break up
cause ima blow up like after seeing soda shake up

Just really nice flow,.. solid drop,.. hope to see more from you, stay active
and keep writing.

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it wuz ok but not actually dope to me 7/10...good wurk....

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good looking out on the feedback
but i need more feedback
fuck the nice vocab and metaphors
this is the real reason i chose to be a rapper for
it feels like my mind is trapped with war
to the point i dont respect if that is yours
cause when i put 2 fingers up im scrapping whore
and i aint talkin about the fuck you that will leave faggots sore
all you see on my street is cops at door
cause we all on the same hustle that'l leave pockets warm
if you think im not real you must be misinformed
cause i spit shit that'l make sockets form
the niggas on my block would just be amazed to walk in a prada store
and we here loud things at night like a thunder storm
the rain falls from the sky,like tears from our mothers eye
cause she working a 5 to 5 and still struggling even when my brother try
so now i got a step father so we have help from another guy
saying shit got better would just be another lie
cause more money means more problems
cause i spend my money on the littlest shit like condoms

im sorry i had to cuss alot but this is real talk
rapping is like a movement and nomatter how wack you say i am i still walk
like bone crusher i never get scared ..i got the chilled heart
i come harder than im already am like a steel shark
i aint got nothing more to say so ima leave this at a question mark
like a bad break up this is where the depression starts
i stay active like teen sex
and wants to get big like a blonde teens breast
this is best said then written for respect
so like ass on the mic im about to start shittin in text

i like the flow u have its good keep it up, the story was good, i felt some of the lines u spit you def keep it hood an more reality then that fake super natrual shit that people always claims get you in the game which to me it dont.....

lost poet quoted the lines i was feeling as-well those are the best line in this drop keep it up fam an we should collabo on a joint or something hit me up if anything fam 1.........

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NOT TO BE FUCKED WITH!!!!

good looking on the feedback

i mean damn can i get some feedback

cause ima shine so bright people think they seen the light
in the day time i stay with a knife but i stay strapped in the night

loved that right there
pretty damn nice....flowed very well....alot of multies that fit right in with flow...vocab was very nice it made it more enjoyable to read...the topic is very very good....i loved the creativty of this drop....really good man keep up..

good lookin on the feedback
can i get somemore

chorus wasnt bad, first verse maybe could have used a better rhyme scheme and shit, flow coulda been tightened up a bit too maybe. but overall not bad. although it annoys me that you spell the da lol.. but keep doing you man, hit up my sweet dreams piece when you get the chance

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good lookin on the feedback
so can i get more

Not bad, could have used a little bit better structure, i like the emotion you put into it!....I give it a 7/10 not bad...... Keep droppin man

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