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D.Zaster | 4 | 44.44% | |
Ill Technique | 5 | 55.56% | |
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12-25-05, 09:08 AM | #16 |
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12-26-05, 09:09 AM | #17 |
Skadoosh!
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IP: 5121 066B
Voted For: D.Zaster
He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career wordplay was forced, concept was played.. You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster But When They're Gone And You Step U...... .......Everyone Breaks Out In Laughter the attempt at playing off his name was pathetic.. I'll Hand You A Lump Of Coal For Christmas To Help Build A Spark You Try To Blend Everyone's Style.....And Find Yourself Ripped Apart this was just weak man.. I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy] So You Can Use It As An Excuse....... For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy concept for a personal was used poorly.. I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix! weak closer, the period shit was retarded.. Ok, this verse was weak as hell. You started off with a played concept and some forced wordplay to get you going. The attempted personals were all weak and didn't come off right, you had the concepts but used them poorly. The closer was fucking stupid, doesn't really resemble a punch, or at least not an affective one. Overall, you forced too much, your concepts were either played or used poorly, the personals were weak. OVERALL: 3/10 bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart basic opener, been done before.. . . . Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it decent concept and good delivery, funny punch.. fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out these kind of punches been done too many times before, this one was cool though.. You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags average punch, nothing too special.. Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations Lol, decent personal, best punch really.. Right then, you came pretty average with a decent opener and a real nice closer with the personal shit. I think you took it easy here really because I seen some of your shit on RB and it is so many times better than this verse you dropped. Some concepts were a little played, you put a nice flip on the one concept. Overall I think your "windows" line and your closer were what won this battle for you. OVERALL: 6/10 V/ - D.Zaster Word. Return the favour on my battle. The link is in my sig. |
12-26-05, 11:00 AM | #18 | |
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IP: F1FC 4749
how were his weak as lines good in this?
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12-26-05, 11:10 AM | #19 |
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IP: AC41 C306
He didnt say that.
He realised that I dropped weak here, cos your wack. He knows i dropped weak, because hes seen my verses on rb. |
12-26-05, 01:49 PM | #20 |
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IP: AC41 C306
ANd yes.
Up. I returned the favour. yupypupupupypu |
12-26-05, 05:29 PM | #21 |
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IP: D520 1B2E
WTF UP
Yup Yup................................... |
12-27-05, 08:52 AM | #22 |
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IP: FAF1 A8BE
Ya`ll suck at voting.
I voted and left links on enough battles. |
12-27-05, 11:17 AM | #23 | |
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IP: F1FC 4749
fuck you dumbass.....................................
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12-27-05, 01:48 PM | #24 | |
dope
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IP: 8CDA 7A5F
Voted For: Ill Technique
this verse had some really good punches and it had alot more better personals. This was a good battle I think you both did well but technique just seemed 2 have a bit better flow and he had the better punchlines This was a a good battle well done 2 both of you. |
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12-27-05, 02:02 PM | #25 |
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IP: FAF1 A8BE
^ LMFAO.
ok. upyoubitches.......................... |
12-27-05, 02:11 PM | #26 | |
haywut
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IP: 2405 EC7A
Voted For: D.Zaster
He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix! vs. bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags pretty good battle here... I was feelin more of D. Zaster's concepts though. and he had more quotables anyway. v/ D. zaster
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12-27-05, 02:14 PM | #27 | |
NO SURRENDER
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IP: AC2A 692A
Voted For: D.Zaster
bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it VS (You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster) If that was the punch it would have been heavy. I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy] So You Can Use It As An Excuse....... For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy D clearly took this one. NO HATE RTF
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12-28-05, 12:03 AM | #28 | |
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This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
IP: 6EB9 28C9
Me and D are in E Style, so I can't vote on this shit.. but here's my feedback..
You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags vs. No quotables. I think D.Zaster took this and shit.. |
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12-29-05, 03:54 PM | #29 |
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IP: 347B 03D3
Word.
Up once more 1 more vote needed people come on |
12-30-05, 07:46 AM | #30 | |
The Saviour
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This was feedback posted for Ill Technique
IP: 2A9D 1443
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