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Old 10-26-05, 06:16 PM   #1
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Ike - The Robbery ( RV Idol Round 3 track )

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i left feed on BRO YAO's track and Cho Kahn MiWang's track


i really HATE this damn song to be honest...i felt i half assed it......i wasnt gonna post it up....but i decided what the hell.......

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should be the 3rd one down.....The Robbery
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Old 10-29-05, 05:31 PM   #2
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lol, if u hadnt sed u hated the track maybe u would get more feed, but ill listen anyways

the intro is cool...... its funny cuz this intro even reminds me of the intro for "criminal" and "i still dont give a fuck" except u didnt have a funny last line

im actually really really feelint he flow on this whole track, god damn u were right on point in that aspect..... nice beat choice.... u fall offa lil at 1:30, and the flow isnt great, but its almost flawless untill than... great quality too...

this was actually pretty decent and nice story tellin but u still kept the flow up which is a real good sign..... overall, i could say this was the best track in round 3 of RV Idol without havin to listent to the other ones
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Old 10-29-05, 06:11 PM   #3
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word thanks a lot.....lol i was just gonna let this one die down to the bottom....but o FUX brought it back up lol....ahh o well...thanks...i appreciate it
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Old 10-31-05, 05:07 AM   #4
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Intro is so random lmao...

Beat choice is nice, liking this beat. The flow is pretty good on this one, fell off near end a little yeh but overall it was rather consistent. Also very suitable for this type of track. Good story telling, lyrics are on point without a doubt. I like your voice as well and your delivery on this track is cool.

Outro is better than intro hehe...keep it up man (feedback to learn rankings for RG btw)
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Old 11-01-05, 06:54 PM   #5
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LOVE this beat man !!

nice ass wordplay...havent seen this side of your mic before...nice story tellin shit man,good track ....as always delivery was sick as shit,i liike the way u formed ur verses too
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