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Old 11-23-05, 04:05 PM   #1
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Riddled Desires
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... Untouchable, Seductable Spine-Bending Lust ...
This Mind-Rending Crush has me Intwined by her Touch
Inclined much, to keep my Heart-Felt Desire Inquered...
... And when I Retire, I'll still refuse to Extinguish my Fire.

... Excitedly, I Trample the Preamble & coinside instantly
Coinsedentaly; Whimzically creating one Thick Solid Wall...
One which will Conquer the Monster & won't Ever Fall!
... Clever but false, However I don't know Proper Perseption.

... She skipped the Inspection ... she wanted Perfection ...
Fucked with Erection till she was Pumped with Infection...
One last Kiss, for you Miss, before your end Creeps Closer,
... Free Loader, I just needed the quick Fix of your Tits, now it's Over ...



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Old 11-23-05, 04:07 PM   #2
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Old 11-23-05, 08:56 PM   #3
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the multies were on poin fam u came hard as shi ton this man
that first stanza was crazy good drop
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 11-23-05, 09:32 PM   #4
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multis are better than anyones good vocab great piece your definately one of the most slept on heads
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