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04-25-07, 02:44 PM | #1 | ||
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Ya momma has nice legs I wanna check inside em
Even years after her vagina still sweet.. how the fuck you come out so rotten this was iiiight tryn come fresher with the concepts mah dood. i see your thinkin out of the box and tryna be creative but try to word your ideas better yanamean vs yo moma reminds me of a bowling ball, just to state facts cause you finger the hole throw her in the gutta an she comes right back yo moma's so ugly, it cause's highway havoc when she smile her teeth so yellow it slows down traffic yo moma's a slob, an whats worst the bitch so fat she got pictures of food in her purse ya moma's dirty, an i cant stand the bitch her breath smells soooo bad she can't help but to talk shit ya moma's so retarded, someone needs to clap her the bitch so slow she use's speed stick to get to work faster whooole verse was unoriginal. i can go on yomomma.com or some shit like that n find every one of your bars no need for explanation tebo wins for actually havin his own verse v//tebu
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04-25-07, 11:12 PM | #2 | |
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Phil
a moma's dirty, an i cant stand the bitch her breath smells soooo bad she can't help but to talk shit That's the only thing that made me chuckle. But, unfortunately, it seems like you took the theme this week too seriously. You have to put wit into your verses. Your bars look like they were copied straight from a website. Tebo Ya momma mixed with a blonde would be kinda hot & damn... if she shaved them legs & mustache, she'de resemble you alot This ended the battle. Your verse was overall decent. Nothing really stood out but this. You definitely had enough though. -------------- VOTE: TEBO -------------- |
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