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Old 04-25-07, 02:44 PM   #1
DiZzy
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Ya momma has nice legs I wanna check inside em
Even years after her vagina still sweet.. how the fuck you come out so rotten

this was iiiight

tryn come fresher with the concepts mah dood. i see your thinkin out of the box and tryna be creative but try to word your ideas better yanamean

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yo moma reminds me of a bowling ball, just to state facts
cause you finger the hole throw her in the gutta an she comes right back
yo moma's so ugly, it cause's highway havoc
when she smile her teeth so yellow it slows down traffic
yo moma's a slob, an whats worst
the bitch so fat she got pictures of food in her purse
ya moma's dirty, an i cant stand the bitch
her breath smells soooo bad she can't help but to talk shit
ya moma's so retarded, someone needs to clap her
the bitch so slow she use's speed stick to get to work faster

whooole verse was unoriginal. i can go on yomomma.com or some shit like that n find every one of your bars

no need for explanation tebo wins for actually havin his own verse

v//tebu
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Old 04-25-07, 11:12 PM   #2
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Phil

a moma's dirty, an i cant stand the bitch
her breath smells soooo bad she can't help but to talk shit

That's the only thing that made me chuckle.

But, unfortunately, it seems like you took the theme this week too seriously. You have to put wit into your verses. Your bars look like they were copied straight from a website.

Tebo

Ya momma mixed with a blonde would be kinda hot
& damn... if she shaved them legs & mustache, she'de resemble you alot

This ended the battle. Your verse was overall decent. Nothing really stood out but this. You definitely had enough though.


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