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Old , 02:58 PM   #4
Optimus
Picasso Of Poetry
 
Joined: Jan 2005
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Text Record: 0-0
Effect vs .Zer0

IP: E499 D7BF

Battle Rules:

8 Lines.
No Crew Votes.
No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.


Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 01-17-05 at 03:28 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.
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Old  
Effect
 
IP:

This bitch is gonna be dead in seconds check out his shit record
everybody hates you Fucker everyone on rv wishes you wen't born
i'ma leave you riped and torn your just an mc who likes 2 be faker
shit this snitch needs to slit his own wrists he's a male raper!
Get blown off my charts yea im'a have 2 let your pain start
get carted off away and get chains gripped on u and ripped apart
Your just silly for challenging me to battle you can't handle
scared to take banter im giving you a little help and sample
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Old  
Optimus
 
IP:

I'll strap alarm clock's to your thigh's to show you a "waist of time".
Cos face the music effect, no one feelin' ya shit like amputee's performin' mime's.
I'll leave effect on the curb like drunken bastard's on vodka shot's..
But effect say's his rhyme's are erect.(str8).how can they when everyone says they a flop?.
Disperse ya wack written's, cos .Zer0'll just ground ya verse into powder..
Effect's skating on thin ice, so i'll just pierce the surface & watch him flounder!
Zer0'll dent ya spirit's like clumsy warehouse worker's handling alcohol.
If effect was a fuckin' detergent, he'd get cancelled out by BOLD.

Done..that in 5 minute's, so w/e...I'll return the favour on honest votes only.
 
 


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