Ca'lam - Real Music (track 4 on my mixtape)


On the mixtape the quality is going to to be studio quality of course.. I already have it recorded in the studio i just dont know how to get it out LOL.. its on wax.. This is just a real quick version i recorded last night to show off..




http://community.rapverse.com/showt...stpost&t=218341
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...stpost&t=218455

Beat: Marinated Musiq
Lyrics: Ca'lam
Verses: Ca'lam
Chorus: Ca'lam


pretty much everything ME biatches.. Im telling you niggas, come Febuary my mixtape "Can I Metaphor?" is commin out.. I want ya'll to cop one.. and any of ya'll who got a mixtape get at me and im cop one.. nam sayin ? it's like that

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

someone said we'd sound tyte on a track together...hmm...probably



ur mic needs more presence...either that or amp it...dub it or somethin...beat is overcrowdin u slightly

quality is cool

flow is nice


pretty solid soundin track homie


get at me for a collab if ur interested



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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

ya'll sleepin me..

yea Q, we can prolly lay some shit down.. forgot your AIM screen name tho

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

cuz we already know ur good.... let people who need feedback to IMPROVE, get some.... *is just mad that u upped ur thread over his*

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

this shit is hot yo nice shit.....real mellow to me i like that shit n e wayz stay up

damn ca'lam you did a good job, you sound a lot different then you did before you left and now your back. it seems like your volume is low but I think it's your voice but I can hear you perfectly fine. hook is dope and on snare right. your concept is very great and well I'm feelin this track nice slow flow and has a catchyness style to it. it's dope man. keep droppin.

I'd fa sho wanna collab wit you sometime if you wouldn't mind, holla.

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yeah man flow was on point.The hook was good it moved me ya know but really the song overall was good song really nothing to say bad about.

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[blood in blood out

Beat is pretty nice, i dont like all the crash's too much tho.

First verse is dope. Lyrics are nice, flow is good, nice shit. Hook is nice, delay/reverb w/e you used fits well.
Nice lyrics through this shit man. I'm glad your back again, my favourite net rapper back in the day

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word.. really appreciate all ya'll feedback.. i honestly do man.. even tho rap is jsut a hobby man.. i wanan get better .. i wanna be to where niggas can just bump shit and be inspired not only to rap or be ill, but to do something with life man.. iunn think people understand what i'm in hip-hop for... im in it for the love.. and im feelin it right now.. thanks for real..


hit some links you want feed on.. I gotchu

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damn son someone told me u was back i didn t beleive em ,
till i seen the trees leaven partin the seas like deamons,

wsup cuzzzzzzz yea man rv needs ya voice back mayne bring that pheonix fire here alltho i agree wit q u need a lil more pop in ya mic or something but still holla atcha boy dawg pzzzzzzzzzz

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nice beat
good flow
delievery coo
emotions all lil off but manly there
lyrics r nice
u mixed it nicly too
overall pretty decent track fam word stay up

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word.. uppin.. i got ya feed if you leave links

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

sry for postin again but I gotta say I agree, raps just a lil hobby but if it ever comes out like people feelin me n shit and all that. that'd be a dream probably but right now it's all bout the fun in it.

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me = want your demo