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Old 02-11-06, 12:23 AM   #1
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them shortyz-them ni#$@z-feat snypa and playerette aka mizz doggystyle

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Old 02-11-06, 01:14 AM   #2
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Wut Tha Fukk Yall Dont Play This Is Hott So Leave Me Feed U Know Il Lget Bakk To You
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Old 02-11-06, 12:29 PM   #3
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i got my verse done..... thanx for kickin me off.........
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Old 02-11-06, 12:34 PM   #4
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shit is real cool, obviously since i wanna hop on this

Track has a sick ass hook on it, too bad quality isnt that great
PRetty cool verse, alotta commercial shit, but its a club song so thats fine..... nice lyrics pretty good flow
Snypa had an aight verse...... not as good as track because of the lack of delivery and emotion, but pretty nice lyrics and flow to it...... better quality too, def
sick ass hook
the girls part is aight, im not feelin it taht much, but its cool for the track, i dont really like her voice tho, no hate

all in all a pretty good tracK

AND TAKE MY VERSE muh fuckas
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Old 02-11-06, 01:20 PM   #5
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Uping For My Boi Track! Wil Leave Feed Later Gettin Food
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Old 02-11-06, 01:52 PM   #6
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yo fux imma stil use yerz too its just remixed so hoolla at me asap on aim
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Old 02-12-06, 02:54 AM   #7
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bummmmmmmpppppppp

( i kno my verse is low....dont say it)
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Old 02-12-06, 06:38 AM   #8
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Ok

The Hooks Dope,Quality Takes Away Like Fux Said

Trak

You Verse Is Good Feeling The Energy In It,The Flows Getting Better Like I Said,Deliverys Koo...Suits This Kinda Track,Presence is Koo,Seem Confident
The Lyrics Im Not Really Feeling,Iunno Why,Emotions Koo

Overall Straight Verse
8/10

Snypa:
You Dont Really Suit Club Tracks,You Should try Like Storytelling Tracks,Your Presence Is Koo I Suppose,Delvierys Farrr Toooo Laiiddd Bacckkkk,Thats Why I Think You Be Best In Storytelling Or Emotional....Lol@YOu Were Looking At Trackstarr Too Bad Line

Miss Is Good,I Really Feeling Her Voice

Overall:7/10

Koo Track!


Keep It Up

Rtf On My Track With Implicit When I Drop It!
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