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Wren-O-Phase 1 16.67%
Arsen 5 83.33%
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Old 10-24-05, 07:08 PM   #1
Wren-O-Phase
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Arsen vs Wren-O-Phase

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Old 10-24-05, 07:08 PM   #2
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Old 10-24-05, 07:12 PM   #3
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Old 10-24-05, 07:49 PM   #4
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your mad weak n ya crew associate with geeks....
ya flow trash,wordplay garbage n ya shit dont hit like writin punches in greek.....

your stupid you cant beat me so face it....
do like mase did get hooked on phonics and go back to the basics....

yu could "spit on the toilet" n still couldnt drop shit...
how you going to beat me if your almost as dumb as your topics??...

punch in ya face leave ya nose wit a scar...
I would use hard-hittin personals but I dont know who the fuck you are...

so life fucked up?? nope yu spittin text aint fair
throw jabs to verse and we usually dont use "ARSE" unless theres a chair

bar 3 - personal.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212619
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blast the 5th in ya liver leave ya "Heart On The AVENUE" thats what i call a nice ROAD...(Wren)

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Old 10-24-05, 08:00 PM   #5
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Lemme Give You Da Run Down, Jus Frown...You "Add" Up To "Sum" Clown
So When It Comes 2 Dis Round, Drink Lead...Cuz U Gettin GUNNED Down!
Legendary Men You Praise, And Since Rap Dies...You At Ya Comin Of Age
Keep Turnin Da Page, & Eventually U Wont "C-Life" With "Cum In Ya Face"!
Slurp It You Luvin Da Taste, Ya "Trash Can't Rise"...As "Nipples Dat Waste"
So Tity Just Brace, Yourself Before You "Lose Hope" Then I "Win Ya Faith"
Talk Ah Big Game Thought You Hot, Until Ya Freestyle Stenched Da Site
Mos Guys Dont Write, But U A Nervous Animal..Dey Wouldnt 'Urge 2 Bite'!
I Gave Dis Fagget Life, Idolize His Challenger, Watch Da Feelings Collide
But Wrens-A-Phase, & His "Verse Is DRY"....So Once You Clicked Dis Page
.................................................. .........................His DROUGHT Samples Inside!

Breakdownz

*In Addition The Answer Is Called The Sum
**When You Drink Somethin It Goes Down, Guns R Filled Wit Lead
***His Avy Is Michael Jackson Moon Walkin (Hes Ah Legend)
****Sperm Gives Life, So If You "SEE LIFE"...Someone Came In Ya Face
*****Nipples Get Hard, Therefore They RISE
******Nervous Animals Hesitate, Ppl Dont Wanna Bite Him...They Hesitate Cuz He Sux
*******Women Go Thru Phases (Menopause), So If His Verse Is Dry Its Sufferin A Drought, His LINK says "Free Text (Sample Inside).....So If You Came In Dis Thread U SAMPLIN HIS Drought

BOOM
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Old 10-24-05, 08:37 PM   #6
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Ahahahaha, Lemme See Sum Votes...Acknowledge This Piece
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Old 10-25-05, 02:20 AM   #7
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Voted For: Arsen

OHHHH very easy battle to vote on.. very very one sided...

Wren O - man your verse was really, really weak, the punches were shocking, you had no personals, flow was crap, the vocab needs to be upped a hell of alot, your structure was also very bad, i didnt like it at all.. so u needa elevate alot brah.. no hate..

Arsen - what can i say to u brah.. your verse killed him.. punches hit hard, nice personals, very good vocabulary, i liked ya structure although a few lines were stretched.. you raped this kid...

Arsen > Wren-O-Phase

Vote - Arsen....
 
Old 10-25-05, 08:33 AM   #8
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Rape Is Such Ah Harse Word...Lol...Good Lookin Tho Keep Votin
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Old 10-25-05, 05:19 PM   #9
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Jeah Lets Get Sum More Votes On This Piece...Too Ez
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Old 10-25-05, 07:43 PM   #10
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its all gravy next time i'll come harder ..........
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Old 10-25-05, 08:52 PM   #11
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Jea I Guess LOL........Nah But Seriously Vote Up Niggas
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Old 10-25-05, 09:39 PM   #12
Willa
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Voted For: Arsen

ok wren work on ur rhyme schem and ur structure all of ur second lines are stretched like whoa no personals with the exception of a fake one and im nto feeling it try to put multis in ur lines and work on wordplay and creativity all of ur lines were played so elevate i like ur id diss u but i dont knwo who u r line the best lol elevate
arsen good structure rhyme scheme much better from ur other battle wordplay pretty good personals good like all the multis
i luved ur last line good wordplay and personal props
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Old 10-26-05, 01:22 PM   #13
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Good Lookin Votin In My Battle Again Will....I'll Return It If You Need It
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Old 10-27-05, 11:27 AM   #14
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Vote Up Niggas.....................................
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Old 10-27-05, 01:07 PM   #15
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This was feedback posted for Wren-O-Phase

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