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Old 03-25-06, 02:30 PM   #16
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werd, that is will DO
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Old 03-25-06, 05:58 PM   #17
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This beat is dope as fuck, thats the first thing I noticed. You delivery is the second thing I noticed. I dunno, maybe it's your voice but it kind of sounds out of place. The flow is mega dope though. The hook sounds DOPE but it could be done a little bit better. I know that sounds like a negative, but it's really really good, I just think it coulda been better. I would definately put this on my mp3 player even. =/ PM me if you want this on RV Radio, its real nice.
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Old 03-29-06, 07:59 PM   #18
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Old 03-30-06, 09:24 AM   #19
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that....shit....wuz...raw, lmao im at school listenin 2 it now, i burned it 2 a cd along, with all of teamones song
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Old 04-02-06, 03:40 PM   #20
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I enjoyed this. Was feeling the beat, which you flowed well over for the most part. Hook was on point, liked the story. I'll probably listen to it a few more times, then have an actual opinion. I'll edit that in later, but yeah this is what I thought upon first listen.
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Old 04-03-06, 07:24 PM   #21
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^^^^^^ werd, go do that..... theres alotta shit thats not very noticeable after one listen
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Old 04-04-06, 06:23 PM   #22
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beat was mixed weak...low end is very overpowering...if they fixed that it'd been way better....flow is tight though....u def comign into ya own fam.....hook...was pretty good jus kinda under mixed...u coulda really brought it out more....story if progressing nicely..delivery is good too like that slight whisper type delivery...fits the beat....good energy...u improved alot man...even tho aint really into beat like that I'm still bobbing...cuz ya energy is on point...lyrically u came good, flow good, delivery good..solid drop...if that beat was mixed better this song would be a homerun...good story fam...good listen...def keep dropping fam.........1
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Old 04-05-06, 10:40 PM   #23
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werd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanx dude.....
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Old 04-06-06, 01:25 PM   #25
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luvin the beat...

your quality is very good...

mixing is awsome.. vol's are perfect..

delivery is eleveated like hell! LOL

lyrics arwe good, nice story.

much props fam, you elevated a bunch..
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Old 04-06-06, 01:27 PM   #26
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oh forgot to add, your story line, and delivery kept me listening the whole time. its easy to understand.. much props once again fam
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Old 04-08-06, 05:53 AM   #27
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lol i used this beat.....


nice 13 scream their.....nice flow...GOODDD emotions man....hooks real touching...u paint a NICE pictue man...thats a GREAT ability to have....love the rocks line...real enjoyable....mom was coked out...man this is nuts...DEEP as song man...great listen
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