ME and Meta-a-four
This was a freestyle i turned into a collab...it goes by the alphabet........the narrator is the first part (me)....the mcee is the second (meta)........the story u can figure out

I moved dis shit cuz the old thread had a wack name.....uppin fo feedback.......atticus ur right it is better thasn yours lmao....hahhaha



An enygma, born with the breath of his last suffering among death of lifes cycle
BBloodshed surrounding every possiblity, tactics providing fear in spite tho
Contimplating life at its prime position, his talents tuned to every nerve of his brain
December, the month when his reign of supreme musical intellect began followed by pain
Earned his title and respect among elders through underground exploits of skills
Found a home in the shelter due to his mother using his hard earned income for crack not bills
Guaranteed nothing only granted hunger, poverty, and the right of remaining silent
Hope a concept forsaken and of none's understanding; uneducation is as common as violence
Incompetence is forced on others; as books thrown away resulting in the expansion of drug trade
Jail, or death the only alternatives to absense in illegal activities with involment since the 3rd grade
Killers living next door, life holds no personal value except gettin paid in full
Lets review once of all the undistputed lyricist whose flows shrouded with notouriety
Magnetize the mic with lyrics of steel, opposties attracting due to versatile veriaty
Neva abandoned hope but detrimental to Americas moraly correct uptight society
Opposing the system used to oppress minorities but were continueing the cycle so we wont be free



Prospects of this battle, im getting psyched, LiL G-Get Ready for a rattle
Questions, NO! he needs a sucker and a rattle, ima make this bitch a huge calatter
Regrettably like Eminem, Im getting signed if i win, “failure is just not an option”
Stupid, No Personal On Me, Some Punches I got, well just about everythin hes rockin
Times come up, I’ve Heard My Name Announced, Here It Goes Its My only Shot
Unfortunately I see Record Executives, ILL Is my Goal, Lose Is My Cannot
Veering left and right as I spit, my hands are getting sweaty already
Watchin the crowd jump and my opponents eyes gleam, I start to become steady
Xtremely Frozen, Im gunna choke, I know it, I don’t hear my self when I spit
You can see my nervousness, if I murdered someone you could tell I’m the culprit
Zenith, I Finished, Im at the highest point, nothing can fail me now, im the motha fuckin greatet

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i liked da idea for i aint hatin yo big chasew/e da fuck it is u got problem wit b a man bout quit hatin over senseless shit n keep droppin it i felt da way ya'll did dis hell ya its worthy for da july/august shit keep doin ya think n calm down a bit shit bickerin n fightin like a bunch of 4 r olds im da type dat admits beef for a reason not playground bullshit think bout is it dat serious peace out

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no beef den....stop sayin nigga tho.........and take my advice ya structure sucks fix it.........forget that one thread..wen i get pissed i lose control....

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yo im sry if u dont like it when i use nigga in raps but u cant judge sum1 u dont kno feel me like i said ive lived round blacks my whole fuckin life i cant help the slang rubbed off on me 2 my people in jersey n even homie's i met in da army i was always considered one of da nigggaz so i cant help if i tlk like u so freely try n understand from my point of view...n yea i kno my structure need work but u gotta admit i aint dat bad c'mon now i got 2 open battle's both im winnin so far n 1 of them da person im battlin aint even drop his verse yet n he challenged me n i already 2 votes c'mon think bout it thanx peace holla its all love rememba its jus music

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kool man...but just keep it on a low............like Eminem was surrounded by blacks but if he said niga....hiss career would be done wit black people..........uppin fo feedback.....

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uppin fo dis shit................comeon people.....

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Lol I Already Responded On This So Im Not Gonna Give Some Long Thing Like The Last...
But Nice Job...
Can't Knock Me Off The Top Though...
Haha...
~One~

no we already did..........lol.........we pissed in ur gun that shot our bullits

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uppin plz playas.......

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never noticed this thread, lol bummp

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lol its new skool....the odl name was too bad......

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alright, yes this drop was dope too, very creative and flowed very well, beautiful imagery in ya words, all of you nice job.............

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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

thnx alot...open mic....stuf.....atticus if u see this recommend us......

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yeah its hot...but not really the greatest thing in the world......nice scheme and all...vocab was hot....flow was on point........but really not mag or vet material onez

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