Word. Really deep track. Just lay back, and think about the questions. One of those "Why is shit so bad/what the fuck is wrong with the world nowadays" type tracks. Fell it.

I left feed on Intermentals "Why" and Ike's "Chalupa Grande"

www.soundclick.com/blackmagikproductionz

3rd track from the top I believe.

Hook it up with some feed, and I will RTF.

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I liked it.
the beat was nice, layed back.
I like the approach.
Lol, its much easier to right feedback to songs you dont like, but I like this song.
And thats that...aiyo, we should do a remix

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ok it wont play so i gta d/load it

peeping now..

ok you kick in... accapella wow lyrics are real deep.. flow is on point man, emotion is kool delivery is dope, i like your voice, i live this beat its sick

hook is ill.. lyrics are nice feelin it

ok the biuld up to the next verse feelin it..

kickin in again. flow is on point aswell lyrics are dope again. defoo puttin this on my mp3 dope shit...

hook the effect is kool on this.. not too much just right good i like it alot man,

overall dope track man.. feelingt everything bout it. emotion delivry flow lyrics all ill shit.. props

keep droppin... pz

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Good looks on the feed yall...Uppin

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The beat, the acapella intro sounds like it's off-beat - like you're not following a rhythm. The beat it self is fitting for the type of track it is. You could use a pinch of reverb to melt the vocals into the beat a little more so they wouldn't have that sizzle on it, or turn down the high end freq's down to take that harsh edge off and warm your vocals up a bit too.

Another vocal layer on the hook woulda made it stand out and take more contrast against the rest of the vocals.

This sounds like a remix to jada's "Why" spit over a differnet beat. The content is very good and actual good points tha sounded liek thought went into em, instead of just throwing together some shit to make a concious track. It's a mixtape track, I'd say.

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Word. Thanx for the honest feed. Uppin

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this was real good.deep shit really i think better then kiss shit since you could answer all of kiss stupid ass questions.your shit in the beggining i think is good cuz it throws the person off and then you smash on them little time out after first chrous pissed me off but otherwise was really nice a 9/10

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I can hear some of ur "noise redux"


I heard this beat before...like it


ur flow is good on it


but the "WHY" theme is too close to Jada's "WhY" IMO


but...I liked what you were sayin

good track



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Worrrrrrrrrrd. Favors will be returned tonite...Uppin for more feed an shit.

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yo i'm feelin this joint.......da concept is juss dope.........

your transition from idea to another is smooth, flow and delivery all that is on point...

Hook is tyte......man dope track..

keep em comin....

pz

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RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215435

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Thanx...

Uppin

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jesus black.....u suck balls......who would ever even think about putting out a track with you?

*shakes head*

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