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11-23-05, 08:30 AM
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Intermental, CMP, Jessica - Why Remix
IP: 34AC 98EA
www.soundclick.com/intermental
jessica (intro) CMP (first verse) Intermental (2nd verse) http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215181 http://commmunity.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215321 www.soundclick.com/intermental "WHY" holla atcha boi..one.. 
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11-23-05, 11:14 AM
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IP: 2FDF 5C29
upppin...............
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11-23-05, 11:25 AM
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I'ma Royal
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IP: AF58 598D
beat is average..nothing special...nah i didnt like it
jessica (intro) not that gd.......i dont like her voice....or that ok nothing special CMP (first verse) flow is ok, not bad...... Intermental (2nd verse) quality is kinda gd, lyrics r nice, flow is kl.....better than cmp best part of this shit....yea homie...nice job not bad song....
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11-23-05, 11:27 AM
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IP: 2FDF 5C29
thanks homie............
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11-23-05, 11:44 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: F7E3 42B8
Ite, yuh i like the beat has a nice ring too it. I Like the vocals and the end of each bar nice enpahsism, sounds gd. The hook is ite could have been better though. Verse 2 was good, nice lyrics and flow props.
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11-23-05, 11:53 AM
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
ok....
sample is pretty sick.... piano's are sick aswell man takes along time for the beat to kick in dont it lol there we go.... hook is pretty meh emotion aint good on that lyrics are iite on it thou... sounds a bit borin first guy he's iite... flow is kool.. emotion is meh though.. delivery is pretty kool... lyrics are straight. flow gets a bit repetitive though, needs swuitching up.. or at least change of rhyme scheme, hook inter: vocals are a tad loud... emotion is better than the other dudes... wheres ya uk accent u sed u had? hahaha lol lyrics are dope, flow is decent changed ya rhyme scheme nice shit strong verse man overall its an ight track no ya best but still good... keep droppin em man pz |
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11-23-05, 12:03 PM
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IP: 2FDF 5C29
thanks homie.......
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11-23-05, 01:30 PM
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IP: 6F18 1362
uppin.............
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11-23-05, 01:40 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 9457 B83E
alright gotta leave feed for fam
alright not feeling the girl really her voice is really shaky she almost sounds like those chipmunk samples first guy not feeling the intro to his verse his voice is ok i odnt liek the effect he put on his verse wrong typ fo track to do it on overall flow was cool nothing special lyrically id like to hear him speed up his flow intermental lyrics were alot better than first guy flow was pretty much on alot better than ppast tracks overall cool track wasnt feeling first guy intermental i think your vocals could be turned up a little bit props on the track
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11-23-05, 01:41 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 9457 B83E
oh yea you can hit up my track and vote hot if you like it
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11-23-05, 02:08 PM
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IP: 6F18 1362
fo sho imma get to that now
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11-23-05, 05:14 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: B2FE 27A6
i like the sample at the begining, first dudes verse is cool and weird, flow is cool and original, like his voice, verse gets annoying at the end lol, hook is dope, i really love the beat, inter props for this song, its your best seriously, loved your voice on this one, your flow was straight and flow too, props dope job man
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11-23-05, 07:04 PM
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IP: FB92 E6EB
....chorus...::no good::
1st rapper: u dun have the right kinda voice to do something like that sound like ur getting choked...but eh the flow switches so much i cant realli get a good understand on what ur tryn to do..... 2nd rapper: ....ur better then teh first guy it was str8 ur flow had meaning u fell off beat a lil but thaz koo u sound like a beginner (if ur not sorry mean no offense) but ya i liked ur verse better then the first....keep tryn Hopefully u will do better next time "Remember" i am not an asshole lol i have to post thsi to everyone im just critical aight ? so try harder consider thsi NEGATIVE MOTIVATION to try harder and shut me up
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11-23-05, 08:49 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 25DE 02DA
Kinda feeling the beat...The sample was cool...First dude, not feeling it. Flow is boring, delivery is plain...I cant even really understand what he's saying.
As a whole, Im not really feeling this track. Keep trying though man. Pz |
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11-23-05, 08:57 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 25DE 02DA
RTF on "Questions"
Thanx. |
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