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Old 12-10-03, 11:53 PM   #1
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Everyone NEEDS to download this song!!!

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If you are a true Bundy fan then this is for you...I went above and beyond to make this one even though I had a cold when I did it...I put a bunch of effort into this one tryin to mix it and it still sounds ass but just listen...This is from a mixtape I'm makin called BUNDYMANIA:The Mixtape...Enjoy and leave feedback and links if you wish...

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Old 12-11-03, 11:21 AM   #2
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Hott Track, nice flow got some skills unlike alot of the bitchs on this site. Holla at me Peace
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Old 12-11-03, 12:50 PM   #3
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yo man you got some good flow and it is definately catchy, way better than my shit. 8 out of a 10 good job
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Old 12-11-03, 02:15 PM   #4
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yo this shit was off the hook, it was catchy, nice lyrics, an overall hot track not too many bad points!!!
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Old 12-11-03, 02:56 PM   #5
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I'm new to this site ya'll and I still gotta get to know who's who but for eerbody that replied good looks on the feedback it's really appreciated...Duce what's good...
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Old 12-11-03, 10:25 PM   #6
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This was coo. Nice sound and mixing, Your flow is decent, you got that Brick City type flow in your rhyme patters, very Outsiderz like....Decent shit though......
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Old 12-11-03, 11:02 PM   #7
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flow was dope... delivery is dope... voice dope... nice mixing....
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Old 12-13-03, 01:05 AM   #8
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Greatly appreciate the feedback gentlemen...Like I said, I'm tryna see who's who around here to see who's cool and what not...I see everybody that replied as of yet is mature and chill...Good looks though for listenin...
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Old 12-13-03, 03:20 AM   #9
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dope owl heres some of my shit im doing mixtapes also but yeah im not supposed to have them on the net they recommend. But heres shit at my house and somewhat my crew....
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Old 12-13-03, 12:12 PM   #10
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nice shit dawg keep ya head
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Old 12-13-03, 02:08 PM   #11
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Thanks for the feeds ya'lls...Prophet I peeped your joints...That twoverses track was ill...That dude that was singin sounds like Eminem though...I thought it was him...
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Old 12-14-03, 12:50 AM   #12
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man, how long have u been spittin for? i needa develop a flow like that, i've been spittin for bout 4 months just that it aint comin. http://www.soundclick.com/twest, can u give me sum tips on how 2 elevate my flow, longer lines etc....ur the fukkin best unsigned artist i've heard man.
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Old 12-14-03, 01:20 PM   #13
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Thanks for the feedback West...I tried to hit your page up and it said 401 error Not Found or somethin...But as far learning how to spit better and flow and all that, try writing a rhyme and spit it to different tempo beats(slow, medium, fast) and see if your words always stay on beat...That's what I do to practice flow and riding a beat...Another thing is you have to know what you want the rap to sound like...Another is to count bars...Lotta people don't do that correctly and that makes your flow go off beat...You just ride the kick and snare or drums or bass...I'm talkin like I'm damn Kool Moe Dee or Special Ed or somebody but that's just what I do...
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Old 12-14-03, 03:34 PM   #14
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haha, my bad, the , at the end is the problem. Still man, how r u not signed, u gotta go promote urself or sumthin lol, ur amazing.
thx for the advice man, really appreciate it.

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Old 12-14-03, 04:12 PM   #15
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Okay okay, that No One Comes Close...I know that Joe song man...I used to listen to that song cryin and sh*t but nevermind that...As far as the flow on that song it's not as bad as you think it is...Not bad at all and trust me I heard a lot of cats flow...You just have to show some emotion on a song like this...I have a song on my page called Sounds Like A Love Song...Peep that and listen to my verse(the 2nd) I was off a bit but I softened up for that...You did well on this sticking to the topic and throwing in punchlines(Like Pac said till the end of time)...Hey man, I wanna do this beat over for you would you mind?
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