aight.....

RULES

10 lines
20 mins to spit afta both have checked in......{he wanted 40mins but we made it 20}
no hate votes and so on....

good luck dawg......

u jus gota check in.....a will check in afta you.......

once again......

good luck.............................................. ....

laterz

aight, im checkin in...................................

a cant tell ur keyin up ur verse even tho u aint checked in.....

but wot the hell.....

ima spit in a few mins..........................

yo freeman u cant handle me/
its like ur bruno and i'm muhammed ali/
as u can see were in to different classes/
ur the wanker i'm dat guy ur girl fancies/
yo i didnt want 2 hurt u son/
but u asked 4 this battle so i'm droppin da bomb/
with a bang the same way dat i fucked ur mum/
u heard her screamin my name even after i'd gone/
anyway anough about ur dumbass mom/
did u kno she puts her tongue between ur daddy's bum/

__________________
I kno u niggaz r second guessin da state i'm in,
Bitch i'm into making hit records dat spin like rims.

a can jus imagine ur verse rite now, tlkin a load of crap --
Slimmey, its over before you have begun, jus quit and leave rap --
a must have a power, cuz a can see whats gona happen --
it gona be a case of, Freeman, u need a Tetnis, uve jus been bitten --
lucky ive already had my booster, so u cant give me ur disease --
so a can carry on this battle, and merk ur ass with ease --
ur gona be sorry u battled me, afta ur rep's bin dragged thru the mud --
especially when the pictures are released of you sippin on ur mother's menstrual blood --
jus like ur name says, the chances of you beatin Free are very 'Slim' --
wet dreams in ur bed tonight, is the only way u will win --

lets get some votes on this.............................................. .......

good luck Slimmey#

inabit

ite this is how i see this,

flow=free(slim to basic and chopy),
structure=free(slim to slim.lol),
punches=free
personals=free
enjoyment=free

overall= free nice spit man i like the tetnis jab line(clever),

slim(elavate man work on structure)

.............pz


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...430#post1003430

pretty much a merking, Slimmey, u needa add more meat to ur bars, der way too simple, beef em up a bit so they have more content. All categories go 2 freeman, can't give any categories to Slimmey.

vote- Freeman

aight thanks for the vote man.........

im goin to bed now as its officially 'past my bedtime' {by the way, its 14 past midnight for u peeps in America/Canada......

so im uppin this before a go sleep.......

uppin #1

laterz

I can't poll but freeman took it by far....Slimmey's verse was basic really.....played in places......
freeman added some personals, some decent bars.....


Drop an honest vote on my battle with I.C.U if possible man.....

uppin #2

come on, lets get the votes comin in and finish this battle.....

inabit............................................ ...................

flow=free(slim to basic and chopy),
structure=free(slim to slim.lol),
punches=free
personals=free
enjoyment=free

overall= free nice spit man i like the tetnis jab line(clever),

slim(elavate man work on structure)

return da fava

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...645#post1004645

thanks for the vote man....................

let close this now, only 2 more needed for another 5-0

thanks agen

laterz

aight here's tha breakdown:

opener - Freeman (just the way he used "load of crap" made me lol)
punches - tie - neither really (get off the moms tip yall)
personals - Freeman had the only one (chances are "slim")
structure - I'd say Slimmy by a hair
closer - weak, neither

vote = Freeman

ok battle elevate yall pz..........