wrote this tonite because my girl is mad at me and all I can do is think about it.


why I called you my legitimate love
was because of how deep you dove into an intimate hug
I wasn't prepared 2 be hypnotized
I recognized your mind
was as developed as ya breasts and ya thighs
Petty game I'd never speak
I'll die young for long eyes(honey bear)
but never in heat
realize your better than bitches and penny prizes
Nasty sex wit a girl?....nah
would I spit life into?
hop hoes and have children?
desires I'd never recieve strife unto
courtin N frontin
unequal emotions R unforgivable
unlike many I'd never depart from you mentally
never will I physically hit you
I'll caress you so gently
speak 2 see if it would be right
and roll
atomic bond tight
your beauty can't be compared
others existance unseen
you perminantly take my sight
I'm alarmed
surprized to hook up with a dime piece tonight
never will I look away or diss you
cuz your an angel of light hips, eye's and lips
other women make me sea sick
I miss you
Close my eyes as we kiss
standin on a corner clouded in a mist of emotions
I can feel your spirit when you cry
if I fail you your gone forever
I'd better love you peacefully
the sky aint the limit
cuz my mind is my limit
I pray 2 god you stay with me
or else back 2 heaven you'd leave me

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Ya shit is no competition like 'trucker hats' against some 'fitteds'
nigga I'll fade u away like J's on the ballin court in a 'arcura' wit 'tinteds' -mindkontrol

none yall niggas wanna see me...

Hmm... this seems like a personal peice, designed by the author for the author sort of peice.

It was actually quite the pleasent read. Good lookin' out.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

ok you have to post in here the links or titles of three pieces you replied to.

do that now or it'll get closed

i agree it seems like it was a piece written for yourself. i tend to do that when im not sure i understand fully what im feeling, so i write it all out, and sometimes am shocked to read what i wrote. it was a good write, mostly just emotions. you showed us well what you were thinking about.

now get your three replies in here!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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