Ayo how u expect me 2 go down in history & drop the raps//
I'm ill so u kno that I have more punches than a boxin match//
Been real in dis game u ain't challenges u don't want it wit me//
Wat the point of using vocab when peeps don't kno wat it mean//
Break barriers on da industry constantly in this vicious industry//
I burn emcees enuff lately 2 make them consider joinin a ministry//
Ya fake dudez like to brag about skillz really tryin 2 test me now//
Talkin bout stuff u say u did u neva did it tryin 2 impress me now//
Fuck gun talk dawg I'm goin in a whole new different direction//
How u suppose 2 b thug u wouldn't come hard even in erections//
D- Chillz serves u right makez any battler/ rapper wanna retire//
Only tyme they have hot shit if they put their toilet on fire//

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But this was ok....your structure was good i thought in this....you had some alright vocab, try to up it though....had some ok multies, but try to use more of those....flow in this was alright....but overall this was ok...keep at it.