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Old 12-24-03, 06:54 PM   #1
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"FRONTLINES"feat DAN,Jimmy (SoE SHOWING WHAT THE DEAL IS)

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ITE HERE IS SOME THING TO PREPAIR RB FOR OUR COMING

"FRONTLINES"

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-hook

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Jimmy Neutron

leave feed back .. and i will return the favor
ite thanks fam

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Old 12-24-03, 07:19 PM   #2
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returnin the favor....strings....sound grimey....

quality is nice.....

1st verse...needs to be a lil louder....n i think more addlibs....
nice lyrics...abstract....nice performance

2nd verse...sounds a lil more relax than the 1st nigga....needs better addlibs...

3rd.....vocals need to be jus a lil louder....but nice lyrics...

hook is iight....aint really feelin it too much

next verse....is nice.....quality is different....lyrics n flow blend nice

last verse...has the best verse all around.....flow...addlibs...n emotion

flow- iight
lyrics- nice
performance-nice
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Old 12-24-03, 11:02 PM   #3
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what every1 sleepin on this bitch???
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Old 12-24-03, 11:44 PM   #4
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That would be me on the last verse..tanx duke...upping for my niggs
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Old 12-25-03, 02:05 PM   #5
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uppin 4 replys maybe
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Old 12-25-03, 03:29 PM   #6
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yea this was pretty tight
all of yall coming with some nice tracks lately
ill be lookin out for you guys more often
everyone came correct with this props to all
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Old 12-25-03, 03:35 PM   #7
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FRONTLINES
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"Listening...Beat is pretty good. Lyrics are good. Quality is aight. Chorus is ok. The style in this track is nice, all have the same sort of style though, dosen't give diversity in this track. Emotion is def. there though. Overall..."

SCORE: 7/10

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Old 12-25-03, 03:49 PM   #8
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damn this is ill...

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Old 12-25-03, 11:35 PM   #9
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the first guy came it nice... flow was pretty good... turn up your volume a lil though i couldn't really hear you

second guy was coo too... flow delivery was nice...

a different style from a lot of emcees that i hear from...


Dan came it hot... i liked your style.. flow was strait delivery also...

jimmy... it didn't seem like u got a fair amount on this track...

you guys sound a lil the same... so it was kinda hard for me to pick up the verses...
try postin up the lyrics... i couldn't really pick out the words that u guys were saying

not gon talk about production cuz ehh... i got 56k :\ ...

you guys came out nice though keep em comming
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Old 12-26-03, 03:34 AM   #10
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^^lol jimmy could have recorded a longer verse but hes a slack hoe

sick track btw yall

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Old 12-26-03, 12:56 PM   #11
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hollerrrr someone make our crew threaadd
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Old 12-26-03, 01:04 PM   #12
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this was iight....hook was good.

the emcees did their thing but i dunno, i guess this wasn't really my type of track, but it was kool for others i guess....just my opinion....the beat was bananas...whoever did this (props to you)...you just need a baseline and you good....OnE





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Old 12-26-03, 03:03 PM   #13
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Hoffa!
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Old 12-29-03, 03:50 AM   #14
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word ^^^ up up and away
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Old 12-30-03, 04:58 PM   #15
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Yall doin ur thing right here.. Shit was hot no doubts.. Flow was sick from everyone.. Lyrics was grimy type underground shit and im feelin it.. Presence from everyone blended pretty nice.. Jimmy in my opinion came really nice here.. I like ur voice gives me some crazy mad emotion when I hear ur tracks..keep that shit up boys..peace

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