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Old 12-25-03, 03:51 PM   #1
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Amaznle - Let Go

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yo wussp everyone... sorry i haven't been active

check out my new song Let Go and please leave a reply

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spark up my fuse and i'll spark up tha rage//
leave you confused dawg i'mma leave you amazed//
A raise place you high on top of tha ground//
No surroundings shit leave you only hearing dark sounds//
only dark grounds you standing on death//
best bet place met can't be my replacement//
There's only one of me i'm a one of a kind//
in time gettin better i'm takin over tha rhymes//
ova ya mind dawg Call me tha warlock//
stompin knockin leavin ya jaw drop//
P styles stands out Damn put ya hands out//
I can't stand Diddy wit this cheese cake dawg i'mma put Da band out//
New style fresh flow droppin hits let's go//
Let's roll takin it to the very next level//
man fuck tha critcs i'll leave ya bent backward like a pair of sandles//

Chorus2x
let go let go let the system go//
let go let go krunk on tha flo//
let go let go i'mma let ya'll knoe//
fuckin wit me and ya'll gettin fold//


Bitches run around my accent askin so I'm passin smashin//
Bring me down dawg that'll neva happen//
Asian i'mma always be rappin Clappin//
Roll around tha block man always be bashin//
one down two down there goes ma enemies//
Always havin foes until it's the end of me//
They droppin insults so i gotta be slashin//
clip to ya chest so now what you a solja?//
I done told ya Treason ya land u done lost ya culture//
Peeps listen up i don't play no games//
Beef wit some of ya'll i'mma say no names//
I'mma bring ya'll pain betta pop on a vest//
No test nothing less betta do ya best//
once you start shit man i'mma put ya to rest//
Come clean appologize shit (pause) i'll still leave you in a mess//

Chorus2x:
let go let go let the system go//
let go let go krunk on tha flo//
let go let go i'mma let ya'll knoe//
fuckin wit me and ya'll gettin fold//


Last verse i spit a warning for all of ya'll//
if u can't take the heat then run around tha ball//
run around tha halls with tha mic in my hand//
attackin you bring out that fight in a man//
steal ya bike than i ran? another gossip folks//
Talk and Talk i hate nonsense folks//
Rollin wit my allies rollin wit ma homies//
down wit my dawgz man neva feelin lonely//
always got my back Ride or die wit me//
fly wit me yo we too superior//
dawg look in tha mirror i'm not afraid of ya//
leave ya cold droppin shit dawg i'ma murda ya//
you stirrin up shit man i'm tryn to be nice//
do you knoe what u doin let alone think twice//
need to think right get a good night sleep//
place you down below i'm placing you below very deep//

Chorus2X:
let go let go let the system go//
let go let go krunk on tha flo//
let go let go i'mma let ya'll knoe//
fuckin wit me and ya'll gettin fold//
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Old 12-25-03, 04:04 PM   #2
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"Listening...Beat is nice, like 'em Rock it Production beats. Quality is so-so, sounds like you got that flange thing on your verses. Sort of to loud on the mic as well. Lyrics are aight. Chorus is nice, got that emotion and gets you into the song. Overall it's decent."

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Old 12-25-03, 04:12 PM   #3
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Tight beat, nice wordplay, sick flow. This is a nice piece remind me of my manes opey when he was first startin out . Rate it bout a 7.5/10
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Old 12-25-03, 11:05 PM   #4
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thanx for the feedbacks uppn
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Old 12-25-03, 11:42 PM   #5
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replyin as ilisten


lyrics r sick but ur flow gets repetitve

chorus is ill

beats nice

work on ur flow a lil more and try switchin it up some more

itll keep the listener more entertasined


nice shit tho

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Old 12-26-03, 03:38 AM   #6
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thanx for the replies so far... uppn... reply to my song and i'll hit yours up too
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Old 12-26-03, 09:47 PM   #7
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uppn
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Old 12-27-03, 09:42 PM   #8
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uppn everyone
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Old 12-30-03, 08:59 PM   #9
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Uppn hit me up wit a feedback and i'll return tha fava
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