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Old 12-27-03, 06:18 PM   #1
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Quick Verse..may put it to Mix Tape!! English Boy. lol

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jus a little summit...
jus little ideas and shit we puttin together for our mix tape
"Content w/ the shitty thangs in Life"

the quality is a bit wack..but so is my comp lol
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Old 12-27-03, 07:38 PM   #2
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im listening...bah this beat lol...i guess its still hot....delivery could be abit better, along with vocals bein louder...im not sayin this is wack or ne thing..its ok..ur flows on point and structure is good but ur accent is wack kid
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Old 01-05-04, 02:53 PM   #3
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hop off the accent

UK accents dope

qualitys pretty shitty..but thats obvious

flows decent..decent lyrics for a freestyle

this is nice

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Old 01-06-04, 05:32 AM   #4
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heard this before....n this guy is ill mate....Our mixtape in production at the mo so stay locked!!!!!....Agree wit sphere...Good flow n shit....We gonna blow mate!!!!!!
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Old 01-06-04, 12:11 PM   #5
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Old 01-06-04, 07:06 PM   #6
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this is good. you could improve though on delivery and the production, plus you should of had more of that piano(think that's what it was) in the beat. keep it comin!
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Old 01-08-04, 06:31 AM   #7
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well dun......Uk stuff n i luv uk stuff......great freestyle
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Old 01-08-04, 08:51 AM   #8
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this isn't mixtape quality shit... it skipped half way thru... lol... u said pint... you so british... or sumthin' like that... i guess for the most you had ok flow and delivery... production needs work... lyrics for the most were ok, didn't understand sum the shit u said... kinda muffled... ok track ... peep my track .."Sick of it ALL"...
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Old 01-08-04, 04:02 PM   #9
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whatup kid?
nothing wrong with that accent but i think you should work on your voice techniq & flow.If you could combine that accent with a new school flo..-that would be dope!!The beat is not bad but i think that the piano sample should blend more with the synth sounds.
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