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-Technician- | 5 | 100.00% | |
Lil Phresh | 0 | 0% | |
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12-30-03, 06:01 PM | #1 | |
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Lil Phresh vs -Technician-
IP: 0471 C22A
You know the rulez.
If you don't, check in the Bitch Slapped thing. I key when u check in and the same for you. Checking in... |
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12-30-03, 06:05 PM | #2 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: BDE8 1790
check.........check............
.......................... time for you to lose your .......................... neck..........neck................
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12-30-03, 06:08 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 0471 C22A
[[[[[Fuck the Technician]]]]]
...Your gettin "sat" down like at dinner cele-brations,Show my respect for you by giving you shell-ovations(he'll get clapped)........ ...Smack you up, i attack-goons, this kid "spittin" more "retarded shit" than handicap bath-rooms... ...Where u get ur words from prolly a wack-school,Your like a "hot actress" soo how could u even act-cool... ...Lookin like "smoked" cigar ashe like grey-dreads, And you cant come out on "top" cause ur gettin "cut short" like shaved-heads... ...Tech comin out this battle lookin like he got stuck-in-fights,Your always "wrong" so as a person fuck-ya-rights... this was a shitty flow. trying out a new structure. waiting for ur flow. he prolly gonna win. but, VOTE AND DROP A LINK... btw, teh bolded words are the rhyming words, for the slow person. lol. |
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12-30-03, 06:41 PM | #4 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: BDE8 1790
^ haha nice attempt at a good verse........heres my 10 minute Key.....
.................................................. ..keying now......................
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12-30-03, 06:50 PM | #5 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: BDE8 1790
This battle was supposed to be ten lines what happened?
Oh, lil phresh started pretendin that he was actually rappin Puttin bold shit and quotes for the punches you attempted If you didnt bite that whole verse I'd hafta say it was rented I told you it would be your funeral you were up to the challenge By the way you write your verse I can tell you nothin for talent You had nice wordplay.....cuz I'm playin with your verse kid With all that filler?....you must be holy....you gotta be Clergic Fuck a closing bar.....you wack newbie dont pose as hard Like a frozen star.....i can break you when i throws my arms
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12-30-03, 06:51 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 0471 C22A
nice drop man. uppin for votes. UUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IINNNNNNNNNNNNNNN###########111111111
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12-30-03, 06:57 PM | #7 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: BDE8 1790
indeed............upppin.......................... .................................................. .................................................. ..............................
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12-30-03, 06:57 PM | #8 | |
ComPleX To Much To Handle
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IP: E374 9369
punches- tech, lil p you lacked punches you "tried"
flow- tech, lilp, you gotta work on that vocab- none complex- none creativity- lilp humor- tech, i like ur opener opener- tech closer- tech lil p, you gotta change ur strechted lines like tech's verse tech, stick to vets voote- tech EVERYONE HIT THIS UP http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=killer |
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12-30-03, 06:59 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 4584 DED9
Well....
Technician takes this with more experience and better flow. His vers just flowed well. the structure was impeccable and he won in all categories to me. I don't even think that lil phresh wrote a whole ten bars... Maybe i need to read again, but that won't changed the fact that technician wins.. Both of you...please? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102471 |
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12-30-03, 07:00 PM | #10 |
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IP: D917 C89A
He one upped you fresh... any way good battle yall. Technician's flow was litttle smoother from the beginning to the middle.
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12-30-03, 07:01 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 0471 C22A
aight. 0-1 you. keep the votes coming in........................ UPPIN #2..............................
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12-30-03, 07:02 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 0471 C22A
i meant to say 0-3 but it wont let me edit. sorry for the free-post, but just keeping the update....
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12-30-03, 07:02 PM | #13 | |
ComPleX To Much To Handle
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IP: E374 9369
Lilp Verse: yo it was strechted like a bitch, no flow, bad punches. you gotta take out the bold and "
Tech- Yo you had nice punches hard hitting, good flow, ok wordplay and i liked ur opener and closer. thats y u win it |
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12-30-03, 07:03 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 0471 C22A
0-4!!!! damn im getting my ass merked. but thats aight. i learn from my losses. this was a good battle man. i need to elevate some more
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12-30-03, 07:04 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 0471 C22A
wait... no its not. rock already voted, its still 0-3. but keep the votes coming. and why wont it let me edit!?!?
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