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No d/riders
no crews.... so on

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Cannabaraz your wack, your barz belong in the ...bin
If for you barz came in ...Cans, I would still ....win
If your rhymes where a spitting image of your ....face
if you were Frankenstains son, he would be ....discrased
your punches are ..annnoying , not .....problem-atic
when you chuck a swing, its equlevent of a fly going .....spas-tic
When i spit, am powerfull as ....king kong, with punches that leave ....scars
leaving you looking like a experiment gone ....wrong, something like your ....barz
Some people are made limmited, you for this ...game
even if my name was ....Ian Wack, I would still put you to ...shame
If the universe is trully ...endless, then it gives us an ....insight
our brains werent meant to cope with ..somethings, yours with this ....fight

r u serious eki? if that's ur verse..then u fuckin jokin cuz i see u come much harder than that..

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Yo..

Eki's punches are not vernacular, Matterfact hes the worst..
An It's funny they vote Eki, when noone even reads his verse!..
An yes I peeped all his battles, And Eki's spits are thinning..
if U say hes tight, it's on lines of Elton n Richard Simmons!..
You need to elevate immediately..oh, your fall off was nice..
He'll be the only rapbattle 20 year old giving college advice!..
not at all nice, So whens the time Eki gets around to stop?..
U couldnt elevate, with Ur rotting bones on a mountain top..

fuck i easily, ran through this rookie..
..if u say Eki is hard, it's more like animal cookies!..

think that's all i need.

First thing I gotta say, don't use $10 words if you can't make them work. For example:

"Eki's punches are not *vernacular*, Matterfact hes the worst"

Yeah vernacular, nice SAT word, but it doesn't fit. Who cares if he's speaking in a specific vernacular or not?

With that being said, I like Cann's verse a little better, but it was close. The nice thing about not being able to vote is that I don't really have to make a decision yet

Eki, I think you need to work on your punches a little bit, there wasn't anything really hard in there.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069

yeh i know it was a bit of a shocker... you live and learn............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....................................

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lol...fuck the last 2 lines..just go off the 10 i have displayed..lol..eki..stop upping it some much!

cannabarz got this he had stronger barz and ya flow
was better.ya structure was decnt along wit ur vocab.
Eki ur punches was decent but they didnt hit very hard..
ur flow was good but them dots(...) was not need that kinda effected ur structure.

VOTE: Cannabarz

please vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1042366

hard to decide.....

ok, judge this shit 4 me pliz!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103332

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^^^thats a gay vote that should not be here but heres my vote

cannabarz completely merked this kid

i have seen better from eki and i think tht he is blocked right now

canna had better punches better personals better vocab better wordplay bettter opening and closer better structure and better verse

canna gets my vote-

hit this up both of u
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103305

i took the time so return the favor please