aight man this is it

10 lines max
no fucked over votes
and ill drop ASAP

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119107
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182770

Lyrical Crook

checkin in bout ta drop now............................................... .................................................. ..........

XL4REAL and RYTHEM212 KOd ya ass and you think you can fuck with me?
I asked who wanted ta give me my first loss, not a guaranteed victory
Your bio is reppin Shertown, Seriously tho where the fuck is that?
Chew and spit it on the globe is the only way thats gonna be put on the map
Mutha fucker is callin himself a nephew when I jus sonned him bitch
Like a crackhead goin through withdrawal you hear me and twitch
Cause my rhymes make ya nervouse cause I tend to spit violent
Dun even drop ya verse you'll get mo votes if you stay silent
Like amputating you at the ankles you've jus been defeated kid
Wait..Lemme get some goggles before you start to "spit"

Tactical I'ma kill you with these lyrical missles//
See, you'a die cause you come with plastic pistols//
Plastic grips so tha gun, its slips, you'a trip//
Your life I rip away, shouldn't have gave lip//
Tactical, you'a dumb trick hoe, don't try an' flo//
It's not a non-flower expo, not no fuckin show//
I piss on yo face, a RB disgrace//
I'ma put you in yo place,don't try one more again, get shot wit mace//
The space between our skills,damn that's alot//
So leave on this thought, you got shot down by a Shertown thug

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182770

Lyrical Crook

Uppin #1 hit this shit up honestly .................................................. .................................................. .

Uppin # 2 come on dun sleep on this.............................................. .................................................. .........................

this one seasy tact took this all the way with better wordplay and personals
j you need ta expand ya vocab get cum wordplay and make some harder personal punches

vote:tatical



o' and j when you droppin in our battle dawg you agreed i set it i dropped my shit and still you havent spit tho you have came online get at me

Uppin #3. Hit this up with an honest vote, drop a link and we'll check it out .................................................. ..................

Uppin #4. Come on and drop an honest vote here please............................................ .................................................. ....................

Last uppin, please hit this up................................................ .................................................. .........................................

its easy to see here tactical took this. nephew...i doubt you have guns and clips and lyrical missels. you dont even have plastic pistols like u said. all that weaponry shit is mad played....and structure was wacked out...just not feelin that newbie verse at all.....Tactical stepped up to the occasion like a true newbie killer. Spit it tight hard and in his face. Like u were condescending the inexperienced boy. Nice verse.

hit this up both of u please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104090

Yeah, Tactical's going to lose soon most likely...
But not fucking today, haha.
Tactical takes all categories, most overwhelmingly COMPLEXITY.
Dialect, you can't come that basic. If you're not going to have flow or structure atleast be creative.
No matter, could luck elevating.

Tac, I think you forgot to vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

^ this is my vote.............................................. .............................
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Tactical spit a hotter harder verse wit better punches and his flow was smooth also it wa spretty good structerd and complex a bit


vote: Tactical