no more than 15 lines in 30 mins

no worries homie.
we be spittin this shit quickly...
you drop first muh nigga...
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well lookie lookie , mister Mc Nookie
ya got stopped by a cop
with a crook at the bookie

a man pussy, tryin not to look sookie
cryin when he spyin, everone seen him lyin
he know he don't get none
he never tire'in 'cos he's flyin higher when he lyin
but the come down ain't never fun

this bitch is twisted, he's a kid with no biscuit//
pimpin off hits from Dicks* shit//
infringin like clippers from Snip Its*//
i'm a better MC, disagree and be eaten//
mispeakin discreetly, and like Chico he's cheeky//
this heat I beat so easy//
pleasin ears and keyly* speakin//
rippin beats apart like Eazy//
smoking trees of weed to please me//
so try another rap, and attack with hotter crap//
baby splatter's all you spat//
splash crap pages like Anime Fantasia*//


* Who is Dick?
Snip Its
* Cheeky Chico
* keyly - as 'in the descriptive action when using a keyboard button'
* Anime Fantasia

sweet as...
no hate MullMental.
one...

uppin number 1 for votes, dont be weak asses. vote and ill drop one back on yours...
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mc nookie.......

puches hit actually...an had strucutre

he also flowed.........

MMM had a choppy verse wit simple shit...........

vote-nookie

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Damn… some ‘common sense’ must not be so common-to-u…
Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~

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this battles was kinda weak but my votes goes to mc nokkie cause his disses was better and he had good vocab.Mista u need to work on ya structure and work on better disses cause some of ur shit aint make sens.Both need to elevate

Vote:Nookie

MC Nookie took this with no compatition.
Other guy had one of the most simple verses iv ever seen. with no punches.

Vote MC-Nookie
please return a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101620

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Damn MC Nookie ripped this kid with hard punches, personals and the works. Nice shit. Mista work on ya flow and structure. Also be mo creative. 1
Please take the time to vote honestly here. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103638

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