20 max
no hate
dr
crew
feeding
biting you no all the normal rules

verses in soon..

..........................................ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch ch checking in, 1luv.

Notice The Punches And Multies...Battle Accepted On AIM

Only Way NFamous Is Releasin A Heated Reason Is Through A Smoke Sign..
Like Me Beating Dialects' Broken Rhymes, Similar To His, Yours Dont Shine...*
Startin' My Spit, Like A Dead Donor, You Ain't Got No Heart Bitch...
I lost Respect For You Cuz Ya To Wack To Get In A Crew So U Doin' That RYS Shit...**(Rep Ya Self)
My Verbal Tactics R Known To Murder You And All Other Herbish Kids...
Im Cracking You Back Quick, And My Lyrics Are Famous Unlike U Wack Kids..
Many Killed B4 You, Your A Whore Dude, Now You Next With Lyrics Undressin Ya Neck...
Like Starved Vultures I'm Peckin Ya Flesh, Battlin Me You Beckoning Death, You A Wreck..
You Trained The Sedated How To Be NFamous*** and Bang The Natives...
Damn, You Misuse Slang So Blatant, You Still Young, I Wonderin' How G1 Gang Related..****
You Losin' Ya Health Cuz I Hit More Hearts Than Cupid, Im Ruthless Dawg..
Little Research I Knew Ya Flaws, Kids Will Keeps Shittin On Ya Like Ya Gllued To Stalls..
Im Attackin Ya Ego, Cant Undastand Yo Vocab SO You Rap With Weak Flow..
You Hittin With An Inconsistent Misfit Like Ben Wallace MIssin' Free Throws...*****
You Claimed Your Change Missed The Toll With The Shit Load Of Coins That YOu Stole...
You Couldnt Even Fake Real If You Married Authentik And Called your Baby Artificial...

*= I KO'ed Dialect OTYP..
**= On AIM He Said He RYS= Rep Ya Self..
***= His Name..
****= G1= Gangsta One < His Crew Called Xtremely Lyrical Gangstas..
*****= Ben Wallace Is Horrible At Free Throws...

NFamous slay wit bars u like fat nosy people u gettin hit when strays get off~
play wit cards? i'll put jokes over ya head to have u foldin like ya avatar~
words that'll work ya jaw dispersin raw i merk wit holes~
snatch ya perse then put ya "fuckin lines" down like flames twerked a pole~
Aint no stoppin fame punches penetrate ya monitor and box ya frame~
couldnt resist rippin a "gay clothing" co. rep ya company "rockin flames"~
im rapping cannons at ya premature cerebral ya gotta watch the mortar boy~
ur a nothing in the game, couldnt make headlines sleepin on pillows of curdorouy~
hazard with my mic aprentice sick wit it flowin liquid odium~
hit the dicks-tionary you tired kid, change ya title to Michelodeon~* (michelin/nick)
you feeding peasant ya weak the kid make u see through my present speech~
by turning u into a ghost instead of a regular pre pubescant emcee~
Flames be reppin I. J.erk L.ogs, ya know his posse?~
they take turns swallowing hot "dogs" like Kobayashi~**
ya verse turns ta crap when u spit it wit the name flames, flames must burn ya back~
all this female has is her words and her balls, and her word is WACK~

*Michelin/Nickelodeon
**nathans hot dog eating champ

1luv.

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good battle.....pretty eqaul...

rock....You got tha structure... flow.... and punches<< they were pretty decent....Had a couple Multies but nothing too exciting

Fam.... Ya word play was cool.... You got tha personals......and thats where it ended....

close battle....but

vote-rock

Rock1n- your verse was pretty good you added too many words in some verses tho but it was full of puches

Nfamous- I just wasent fealing your style man, you didnt have the harder punches but one was pretty good
"im rapping cannons at ya premature cerebral ya gotta watch the mortar boy~
ur a nothing in the game, couldnt make headlines sleepin on pillows of curdorouy"

That was pretty dope

OVERALL- Rock took this one

I took time on your guys stuff please take some on mine

This one has been slept on bad
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103568

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104380

Please vote that first one has been up for like a fuckin week I want to battle again
Thanks peace

Only Way NFamous Is Releasin A Heated Reason Is Through A Smoke Sign..
Like Me Beating Dialects' Broken Rhymes, Similar To His, Yours Dont Shine...*
^^^ok wordplay...ok punch
Startin' My Spit, Like A Dead Donor, You Ain't Got No Heart Bitch...
I lost Respect For You Cuz Ya To Wack To Get In A Crew So U Doin' That RYS Shit...**(Rep Ya Self)
^^^weak...
My Verbal Tactics R Known To Murder You And All Other Herbish Kids...
Im Cracking You Back Quick, And My Lyrics Are Famous Unlike U Wack Kids..
^^^ok wordplay...weak punch
Many Killed B4 You, Your A Whore Dude, Now You Next With Lyrics Undressin Ya Neck...
Like Starved Vultures I'm Peckin Ya Flesh, Battlin Me You Beckoning Death, You A Wreck..
^^^good wordplay
You Trained The Sedated How To Be NFamous*** and Bang The Natives...
Damn, You Misuse Slang So Blatant, You Still Young, I Wonderin' How G1 Gang Related..****
^^^nice wordplay
You Losin' Ya Health Cuz I Hit More Hearts Than Cupid, Im Ruthless Dawg..
Little Research I Knew Ya Flaws, Kids Will Keeps Shittin On Ya Like Ya Gllued To Stalls..
^^^good wordplay, good punch
Im Attackin Ya Ego, Cant Undastand Yo Vocab SO You Rap With Weak Flow..
You Hittin With An Inconsistent Misfit Like Ben Wallace MIssin' Free Throws...*****
^^^lol...nice wordplay
You Claimed Your Change Missed The Toll With The Shit Load Of Coins That YOu Stole...
You Couldnt Even Fake Real If You Married Authentik And Called your Baby Artificial...
^^^lol....awesome wordplay, ok closer

NFamous slay wit bars u like fat nosy people u gettin hit when strays get off~
play wit cards? i'll put jokes over ya head to have u foldin like ya avatar~
^^^ok personal...
words that'll work ya jaw dispersin raw i merk wit holes~
snatch ya perse then put ya "fuckin lines" down like flames twerked a pole~
^^^weaaaak
Aint no stoppin fame punches penetrate ya monitor and box ya frame~
couldnt resist rippin a "gay clothing" co. rep ya company "rockin flames"~
^^^weak punch, ok wordplay
im rapping cannons at ya premature cerebral ya gotta watch the mortar boy~
ur a nothing in the game, couldnt make headlines sleepin on pillows of curdorouy~
^^^lol...nice wordplay, good punch
hazard with my mic aprentice sick wit it flowin liquid odium~
hit the dicks-tionary you tired kid, change ya title to Michelodeon~* (michelin/nick)
^^^....? weak
you feeding peasant ya weak the kid make u see through my present speech~
by turning u into a ghost instead of a regular pre pubescant emcee~
^^^eh...weak punch
Flames be reppin I. J.erk L.ogs, ya know his posse?~
they take turns swallowing hot "dogs" like Kobayashi~**
^^^good wordplay
ya verse turns ta crap when u spit it wit the name flames, flames must burn ya back~
all this female has is her words and her balls, and her word is
WACK~
^^^weaaaak closer


gotta go wit rock1n on this one...just over a better verse

vote: rock1n flames

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ima give this one to famous
better structure
good flow
good punches

since i took my time to tell you what i think, hit up
carlos vs to face