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........In Narative voice from Lord of the rings:.............
"Aragon, Leave this site, Lands of the Wackness await your return"
You will never be hot, if you were petrol, you still wouldn't burn
You think your impressive with you wins, so you turn down newbs
You wouldnt impress, if you were P.Anderson, and exposed your boobs
Your obsessed with Lord of the rings, you fucken geek
Only thing in the movie that would suit you as a name, is that Smigle freak.
There is one Creature you could be if you tried really hard,
You could be a smart and heavenly as a Saint..........a Saint Bernard
After you battle, you got an annoying trend, because you dont compare
You PM the other emcee, and ask him for his rhymes to share
Well ill save you the PM, And give you a word of advice
Aragon , stop winning battles by dickriding, its not nice.

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You talking all breezy and shit....

Don't be gassed by the name... this ain't a movie flick
Better be careful what tools you choose to pursue me with
Forced rhymes and played lines will lead to a long night
Not a personal to speak of... you got on the wrong flight
You on a one way trip... to getting your brain split
I'm twice the pugilist of the cats you've exchanged with...
You wouldn't have enough strength to compete with my flow
If you could lift a ton of bricks.. with the bridge of your nose
I'll drop you like a bad habit... accepting newb challengers
Seven and five's... nothing in my eyes...your amateur
You're... not of my calibur...you probably good for six shots
I pop... I let like six off...with bullets that rip ya limbs off

punches- aragorn(he basicly tole this kids splene out and flossed with it)
flo- aragorn(as usuall a nice flo.....eki was alright but aragorn took it)
meti4's- aragorn(clever usage...just more creative)
multi's- aragorn(this was not hard....he had some)
personals- Eki(played lord of the rings crap but he had some)

overall- aragorn......better thru-out...solid drop...

drop an honest vote here-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...x2&pagenumber=1

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Yo really. I thought that Eki took this. I liked the personals he came with. Aragorn came with some corny personals, and punches that just werent hitting as hard. Many of Eki's punches could've been worded a lot better. But I still think Eki took this one.

Honest vote on my pinkslip battle...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103779

I think Eki gets the win. Both verse were pretty good but Eki started out with a nice, personal opener, and kept at it for the entire verse. Aragon spent most of this time just responding to Ekis verse and onlya few lines actually dissing him.


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103069

eki


........In Narative voice from Lord of the rings:.............
"Aragon, Leave this site, Lands of the Wackness await your return"
You will never be hot, if you were petrol, you still wouldn't burn
You think your impressive with you wins, so you turn down newbs
You wouldnt impress, if you were P.Anderson, and exposed your boobs
Your obsessed with Lord of the rings, you fucken geek
Only thing in the movie that would suit you as a name, is that Smigle freak.
There is one Creature you could be if you tried really hard,
You could be a smart and heavenly as a Saint..........a Saint Bernard
After you battle, you got an annoying trend, because you dont compare
You PM the other emcee, and ask him for his rhymes to share
Well ill save you the PM, And give you a word of advice
Aragon , stop winning battles by dickriding, its not nice.

aight opener way funny personal pounch closer
nice wordplay and meta
good structure and flow


Aragorn

You talking all breezy and shit....

Don't be gassed by the name... this ain't a movie flick
Better be careful what tools you choose to pursue me with
Forced rhymes and played lines will lead to a long night
Not a personal to speak of... you got on the wrong flight
You on a one way trip... to getting your brain split
I'm twice the pugilist of the cats you've exchanged with...
You wouldn't have enough strength to compete with my flow
If you could lift a ton of bricks.. with the bridge of your nose
I'll drop you like a bad habit... accepting newb challengers
Seven and five's... nothing in my eyes...your amateur
You're... not of my calibur...you probably good for six shots
I pop... I let like six off...with bullets that rip ya limbs off

blah good word[play pounchs warned that stronge expected more from you to tell you the truth
pretty weak wat happened??

any way my vote goes to


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better overall verse


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well..aragon took this surely...his disses weren't really all that hard at all...but his verse flowed better, rhymed better and was structured better...eki tried..he almost had better punches, but the lord of the rings shit is so damn played...aragon and that legalis are both gangsta anyway

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