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Old 01-06-04, 07:17 AM   #1
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so much barz. feturing: TWiNZ

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80shots
every1 wanna live no motha fucker wants 2die//
nigger bitching crying strapped-but he knows his lifes a lie//
when his niggaz around he trying be so fucking hard//
doped up motha fucker, at home you a retard//
you know shit about the streets, nigga you pussy//
even my sister knows how to pull them clips wit da mili//
you walk street alone with a level 3 vest coz u scared of death//
and you best friends wit tha feds-nigga how much time u got left//
my lyrics burn straight thru you, u not use 2black music//
wak music pop music-tha streets need real music//
just to be explicit and you think you a soldier-you a bitch//
fronting coz you wanna be down, nigga hold yo lip//
nigga i'll take you to the side where no nigga can hide//
no where to run, no time to sleep,nigga welcome 2 tha dark side//
where guns are just instruments, an really hav no meaning//
bitches carry 44s, and the younga bitches skeaming//



TWiNZ
Lexus
yo nigga hold on bit let me chew on these pussies/
my man 80 was good, but ima illa than herpies/
so much barz to spit, while pushing these fast cars/
see nigga, all i need is 4 bars to send you to mars/
bitches love to front, i'ld love to pull out yo spine/
put yo arteries in a blender and drink it like wine/
stick my finga up yo pussy and punch yo unborn baby/
i have no mercy 4 any1, glokz are old-an i'm fucking crazy/
come round my hood you just might get shot/
wrong thing to do is snitch, take it like a g an bop/
come around again, nigga know you got a 9m/
strapped to the max, ready to pump ten/

8city
(of TWiNZ)

my time to blow-time to flow-cop these hoe's//
run this klik, wit a major chip, fuck these foe's//
time to get rich, life's a bitch along wit the shit//
get money-naah take money-yets fuck till we sick//
till my tity's in yo face-an yo screaming tha words//
nigga u thugged-get me them pearls//
aint like tha rest-need no vest-if i die, then i die//
neva cry-neva lie-i got the urge to get dis cash den we fly//
felt crazy-so i went out got some liquer//
nigga tryed to touch me-nigga lost his liver//
popping locks- with 80shots-along wit lexus-too hot//
keep it real-beef wit steel-to my heart drops//
taking dope-how do i cope-eyes always bloody//
legs feel rickity-and even worse i need surgery//
aint scared to die-so keep blastin-keep riding//
fuck the police hullerin-get that money-we riding//




80Shots
ha ha, we didn't wanna give this a specific name so we just all freestyle, you know! and here's a lil something for all them pussies who front-yeah you know who!

fuck you, yeah fuck you, an fuck 2way and his gay ass homeboy who replied to that fucked up battle, fuck you bith go ride on 2way's dick, ha ha, oi 2way your mums my bitch, ha ha

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Old 01-06-04, 09:09 AM   #2
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..Another 'Net-Thug'..that's what the world needs..more 'chumps'like this clown...this was a terrible drop...your content was wack...scheme was weaker...vocab was below average..instead of 'fakin'..write some real shit...
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Old 01-06-04, 10:29 AM   #3
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Talking ha ha

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wanna be thug, net thug?,,



listen Penskills or watever yo fuked name is, you punk:

i keepin it real the whole of my life, yo punk ass think coz i wanna put my mesaage on the internet, ima a net pussy like you, people like you are the 1's who love to fucking front like a prick, i dont give a fuck what you think, at the end of the day i keep it real if you dont believe then fuck you, its yo opinion, thats you.

have a nice day!
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Old 01-06-04, 01:48 PM   #4
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I noticed you didnt reply to anyones thread, next do that or it will get closed. Thanks.

This was ok i thought.....structure in this was alright...just watch some of the lines length though.....work on your multies and internals, it will help make your pieces much better....try working on your content as well...but overall this was ok....just keep working on it.
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