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01-06-04, 08:18 AM | #1 | |
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the holy grail
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...206#post1057206 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...211#post1057211 this is a track from my 2nd ep which is under construction right now. the songs on the first one got the ying-tang next to 'em. anyhow this is a story about the hip-hop holy grail and one emcees quest to find it, a little bit based on lord of rings and stuff like that: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=820867&q=Hi (high as my blood pressure) http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=820867&q=Lo (low as my IQ) lyrics: i took my training skills that i learned in the dojo/ and left on a quest to find the next level of mojo/ my posessions in a napsack and sandals on my feet/ i walked the rocky road to a random base beat/ i'd heard of a legend told by the old and frail/ of an object called the hip-hop holy grail/ the chalice is only touched by the chosen few/ the rest who failed the test merely froze in view/ of its beauty, so shoot me, thats where i was headed/ keeping my eyes peeled for danger wherever i treaded/ i met a traveller from a distant land/ who told me, to boldly, make my way to the sand/ the great desert of dispair where travellers unaware/ would become forever lost in its gravelly snare/ i walked a 100 miles in the blistering heat/ sweat pouring from my body and hissing at my feet/ dodged rattlesnakes, fought battle dates set along the way/ other emcees could tempt-me and lead my quest astray/ suffering from dehydration, my voice nearly lost/ i wondered if the price was too dear a cost/ i'd nearly turned back before i saw the oasis/ i thought it was a hallucination and faced it/ a man stood at the edge with a mic in his hand/ and told me that to drink i had to fight for this land/ i summoned my last strength and commenced the battle/ threw punches with loud crunches like a foot hitting gravel/ he acknowledged my skill and gave me the draught of life/ he grinned a sad smile with a laugh of spite/ said he'd taken the same quest and met with failure/ found himself banished by the holy grail, the saviour/ he'd been cursed to man this post until the end of time/ to rend the minds of travellers and pen his rhymes/ he was a veteran very few men where better then/ if no-one could get the grail his curse would never end/ i learned the next step in my path of trails/ to find the speakerbox palace, a task thats wild/ confront the gatekeeper who was holding the keys/ show him my steez and make the man bow to his knees/ "how do you plead?" i said guilty and continued to walk/ it was a full days travel with many sinews and forks/ in the road, now feeling bold with the sun on my back/ i picked up my pace and began to run on the track/ the spires came into view on the red horizon/ i stared in awe, no denying the sight was surprisin'/ there were towers 300 feet high and covered in amps/ that glared without light like they were smothered in lamps/ another quick glance, the message could be told in braile/ this was the next step to the holy grail/ any beef about my voice? please refer all statments to mr trigger happy |
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01-06-04, 08:33 AM | #2 | ||
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IP:
listenin to ya stuff now..where u from?...U got a wierd accent mate!!!!!! U sound a lil like Charli 2na...a UK mc.....It was aiight lyrically, but it sounded a lil strained as your voice was strange,n sounded u were puttin it on????????all in all aiight buty needs work
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01-06-04, 11:56 AM | #3 | |
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IP:
pretty boring i'd have to say...like the start of the beat and that but meh... you are slipping into the US accent quite a bit.
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01-09-04, 07:51 AM | #4 | |
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